Chapter 79 You fall in love, I have no objection
"Beautiful to save the bear!"
When Yi Qing said these four words, Shiyu Xiazhiqiu was originally nervous. When she heard this, her pink lips tightly pursed and she couldn't help but smile.
"What's so funny!" Yi Qing lit the table seriously.
Seeing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu snorted lightly, but also sat upright.
After all, I was asking Yi Qing for advice, so the other party's status was the teacher, and she naturally could not be looked down upon by her emphasis on her works.
Yi Qing nodded with satisfaction. This guy was so dirty that he had just transferred to school. Now it was time to seize the opportunity to take revenge, but he was not wrong with the other party's works.
Heroes save beauty is a beautiful topic in itself.
Extraordinary romantic events, both in ancient and modern times, both in China and abroad.
But when modern novels are popular, heroes have become synonymous with blood.
Whether it is Chinese online literature or Japanese light novels, it seems that they cannot be separated from this cliché.
But Yi Qing also knew that this was the general trend.
Because online literature, like light novels, emphasizes fast pace. If the author wants to speed up the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine and warm up his feelings, the basic method is to save the beauty by heroes.
Then it leads to the hero saving beauty and becoming extremely bloody. Basically, every novel will feel uncomfortable if it doesn’t appear once or twice.
Some books even appear several times.
In this way, it would be strange if readers don’t read it. Therefore, he is very unfavorable about the plot of the hero Shiyu, Xiazhiqiu, saving beauty.
This is also the reason why he looks at it at a glance. Basically, as long as the plot of hero saving beauty appears, he can basically guess the direction from the beginning to the end of the story.
"This... how to change this beautiful bear rescue?" Shiyu Xiazhiqiu sat in her position, staring at Yi Qing, her perfect legs wrapped in a short skirt of the school uniform, leaning slightly against the cold table legs, looking extremely soft. At this moment, she faced Yi Qing and couldn't help asking.
Subconsciously lowered his head and glanced at the black thighs with fleshy flesh. As the other party moved, the short skirt rose slightly, presenting an absolute area, which made people unable to stop.
With a light cough, Yi Qing didn't dare to watch it too much, "It's very simple, but you need to remember two points. The first point is the direction of the plot, and you need to follow the character's personality. The second point is not to have plot bugs."
"I understand the second point, but how do you say the first point?"
Although he asked in his mouth, the corner of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised her mouth, as if she was not smiling. Then she moved her thighs slightly, raised her legs slightly, and put them on her legs.
Her thighs were slightly raised, and she didn't even put on her short skirt. Her black and fleshy stockings seemed to be rubbing her. As soon as she put them on, her right leg slid slightly, looking extremely smooth.
Yi Qing was stunned, but the other party was sitting cross-legged, but no matter which direction he looked, he could not see any scenery. This seemed like a kind of mental torture.
"You did it on purpose!" Although it was very pleasing to the eye, Yi Qing couldn't help it.
"What?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Yi Qing in confusion. Her quiet and confused state seemed extremely cute and deceptive, but a hint of cunning flashed in her eyes.
"What, what?" Yi Qing browsed and snorted coldly, "I'm giving a lecture here. Don't think I can't see it. Get it done quickly, it's a good idea!"
Upon hearing this, Shiyu Shiyu glanced at Yi Qing, and a strange look flashed in her eyes, but she still obediently tidied up her skirt, and did not cross her legs. Her legs were leaning side by side, Cherry's small mouth slightly opened, and her eyes looked despised: "It's obviously a crazy leg control pervert, but she still had to hide it to hide it to cover up to cover up her dirty psychology. It's so hypocritical!"
Yi Qing pretended not to hear it, ignored the other party's poisonous tongue, lit the table, signaling the other party to listen carefully, and stopped looking around.
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu curled her lips and stopped talking, and listened carefully.
"The so-called plot direction needs to be followed by the character's personality. In fact, it is very simple to understand. Just according to the male protagonist you set, the protagonist you set is kind, gentle, and indecisive.
Then when a gangster bullies a girl, his kind personality will drive him not to leave easily, but will find ways to rescue the bullied person.
But a person is complicated, and indecisiveness also makes him hesitate, because the protagonist himself has only one person, so he naturally knows that it is impossible to beat the gangster.
You can also use a short paragraph of psychological description to tell the readers the protagonist's psychological entanglement. But in the end, his kind personality still gained the upper hand, so he will still make up his mind to save the heroine.
Instead of like you, you will rush forward with a reckless and brainless rushing forward when you hear the cry for help. In this way, the character you set in the early stage will collapse. How do you write it later?"
After talking a lot, Yi Qing was a little dry-mouthed. Suddenly, a bottle of mineral water appeared in front of her. She subconsciously took it from Shiyu Shi, Kasumi, "Thank you!"
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu had just opened her mouth and said nothing, but she saw Yi Qing open the bottle cap and drink it directly.
Seeing this, she was speechless and shook her head. She didn't care that the bottle of water was also drunk, but asked, "I understand after you say that. It's really incisive to show the plot with your personality. So how do you set the heroine to save the hero?"
"Think about it yourself!" After drinking the water, Yi Qing was embarrassed. Seeing that there was still more than half of the water, I didn't know whether it was to give it to the other party or to put it on himself.
As a result, when he was hesitating, the mineral water was taken back by Shiyu Kasumi and put it on the table.
Seeing this, Yi Qing continued: "You wrote this book, so the plot naturally needs you to imagine and set it. I just help you solve your doubts. If you don't understand, you can ask me if you write it, and you can show it to me. But the story itself needs to be outlined by yourself, otherwise how can you make progress?"
Upon hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu refuted that she could not and became alert.
I seemed to rely too much on the other party when it comes to writing. Thinking of this, Shiyu Xiazhiqiu thanked in a low voice, then turned around and started to revise the manuscript.
Seeing this, Yi Qing smiled slightly and did not disturb the other party.
At this time, the two discussed for a while, and the students gradually arrived at school, and time passed quickly.
After transferring to school for two or three days, Yi Qing also got along with some students in the front row and was able to chat.
This is normal high school life. Yi Qing sighed after her youth. She looked at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu next to her and looked immersed in her novel world, and she didn't say anything. After all, she is a top student, so it should be nothing if she doesn't listen to the class.
Just after the first class, after class, he wrote more than 2,000 words on his mobile phone and wanted to use the time after class to relax.
As a result, the next moment, my shoulder was slapped and I turned my head slightly, but it was my class teacher, Shi Harada.
"You and Xia Zhiqiu come to my office."
Yi Qing looked confused, and then he pulled Shiyu Xiazhiqiu, who was still immersed in the novel, and passed by.
"What do you think is?"
"I don't know, but I know my thoughts were interrupted by him!"
Speaking of this, Shiyu Xiazhiqiu was a little bit gritted.
Upon hearing this, Yi Qing laughed.
Then Yi Qing and Kasunoki Shiyu came to the office with a confused look on their faces, but saw Harada Shi looking at him with admiration, while Yi Qing looked confused.
"I don't object to you in love..."
As a result, Harada Shikyu opened his mouth and opened his mouth, which completely shocked Yi Qing and his eyes were unbelievable.
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Chapter completed!