"Why didn't you come to class yesterday?"

Hearing the sound, Shiyu's eyes gathered. Her dull expression also became lively. She saw that she was just dazed and didn't know what she was thinking.

At this time, Meiyu looked at Yi Qing. After reacting from daze, Wenjing's surface also changed a little, and her tone was puzzled.

"I had something happened yesterday, so I asked the teacher for a day off. By the way, I was not here yesterday. Is there anything interesting happening in the class?"

"If the earth is missing you, it will still rotate as usual. There will be no abnormal things happening just because you are not here."

Critical strike!

Yi Qing smiled bitterly, "That's right, it seems that nothing interesting happened yesterday."

He just wanted to find trouble for nothing. After all, it was still early now. He just got up and finished breakfast, and didn't want to write. There happened to be a beautiful girl next to him, and he was the only person he called a friend in his class, so he naturally wanted to talk.

He has no bad intentions, he just wants to chat!

"How is your novel written?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu asked inadvertently with her hands on her chest.

"Well, I'm almost finished writing. Do you want to read it?" When Yi Qing heard this, she thought of the other party's request.

"Let's talk about it later. Haven't you pointed at me before? I wrote something the night before. Do you want to read it?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was still a little dissatisfied, but it was Yi Qing who gave her guidance before, and this must be admitted.

And when she went back that night, she also chatted with the editor on the Internet, but the editor praised Yi Qing's ideas very much, saying that he had a wild understanding of the portrayal of the heroine.

"So, you have to listen to that person more, which may be of some help to your writing."

The editor said this, and Shiyu Xiazhiqiu couldn't help but feel depressed and could not accept it.

As a result, the night before yesterday, she finished writing happily. After being satisfied, she disappeared the next day, which made her even go to the classroom office to ask her head teacher Harada Shi. As a result, the other party's strange gaze made her feel uncomfortable.

It must have been misunderstood!

"Let's take a look." Yi Qing said speechlessly.

After saying so much, is the purpose still the same?

Shiyu Xiazhiqiu took out the printed manuscript of "Love Metronome" from the table and handed it to Yi Qing.

He put his schoolbag intently, took the manuscript casually, supported his chin with one hand, shook his hand with his hand, and then started to look at it. His look of disregard for his face made Shiyu Xiazhiqiu grit his teeth, but he didn't say anything.

After all, I have something to ask for.

"Why did you write this little?" There was one more page for the manuscript I showed him the day before yesterday.

The other party has been stuck for so long. According to normal circumstances, after the card state is lifted, it is generally impossible to think like a urinary person in the next period of time, but it is not enough to just write that page.

After a closer look, there is not even two thousand words. Just this amount of updates is written until the year of the monkey and the month of the horse?

Moreover, this is a light novel. The so-called light novel actually has the same effect as the Chinese online literature.

If you really want to distinguish between these two types.

One is an illustration novel, and the other is a novel without illustration.

So in Yi Qing's eyes, there is actually no difference between these two, and light novels are just a little taller, after all, there are illustrations.

However, no matter what novel it is, except for traditional literature and youth literature, the amount of updates is an unavoidable topic.

Yi Qing understands Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu wants to write a fine novel, but when do you write a thousand words in two days?

"You see first!" Hearing Yi Qing's complaints, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised her beautiful eyebrows slightly, and subconsciously shook her flawless legs wrapped in black stockings.

This guy didn't even look at her and started criticizing her.

Ignoring Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's tone, Yi Qing began to read it again.

He didn't watch it again because he watched some two days ago and he almost forgot about the plot.

Of course, with fragmented memory support, he looked at it very quickly before, almost looking at ten lines. After reaching the last page, Yi Qing still looked at ten lines.

Yes, it's still a glance.

After reading it, Yi Qing's expressionless face made Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's emotions rise.

Yi Qing placed the pages of the manuscript and handed them to Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu.

Although Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, who took the manuscript nervously, was dissatisfied with Yi Qing, she also knew that the other party's understanding of the novel must be higher than her.

So Xiazhiqiu Shiyu held her breath at this time, her legs stopped shaking, and her expression became slightly solemn.

"Just... I used two states to read your manuscript." Yi Qing frowned slightly and pointed to the manuscript in the other party's hand. "One is to read from the author's perspective, and the other is to read from the reader's perspective."

"Is there any difference between these two states?" Obviously, it was the first time that Shiyu Kasumi had heard of reading novels that there were two states.

Nodding, Yi Qing said: "Of course, there is, reading from the author's perspective is to strictly check, find out the shortcomings of the novel, and then let you correct it.

Reading in the state of a reader is basically not too strict. For readers, their purpose of reading novels is nothing more than finding the pleasure, touching, passion or inspiration of the text.

Every reader has different focus on reading, but every reader does not have too high requirements for a book. Their requirements are to allow him to read.

If they can continue reading it, a novel will be successful in its early stages.”

"What about my book?" Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu felt nervous and had a bad premonition.

"Revise, overhaul! Don't change the previous ones, just change what you wrote later." Although I don't want to say it, Yi Qing also knew that Shiyu Xiazhiqiu didn't want to say anything, and the other party was obviously very passionate about literature.

Then Yi Qing would not be merciless.

Only by wind and rain... can you see the rainbow.

"Why? The heroine's personality I set was written according to what you said." With her lips tightly pursed, Shiyu Xia Zhiqiu was extremely puzzled because she felt very satisfied.

"There is no problem with the heroine's personality, it is a problem in the plot!" Yi Qing shook her head, thinking of the plot she just saw, and held her forehead and said, "It's too vulgar! A hero saves beauty. What a vulgar plot. And when you write about your hero's personality, it will collapse!"

Shiyu Xiazhiqiu opened her mouth, but before she could speak, Yi Qing continued: "You set the male protagonist's personality as gentle and indecisive. Then it is impossible to be too strong in terms of personality, so if he wants to save the beauty, he will definitely hesitate.

As soon as you write about the protagonist hearing a female cry for help, he rushed forward to save the person without hesitation. He didn't even bring him hesitation? If it were a man, he wouldn't save him?

Of course, it is a good personality to muster up the courage to stop the gangsters, but there are ninety-nine of this kind of plot in one hundred light novels that contain such plots. If you want to write a fine book, this kind of vulgar and bloody scene is obviously not needed."

He opened his pink lips lightly and opened slightly, but Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu found that he could not refute it, and finally said, "How should we change it?"

"On the other hand! The beauty saves the bear..."

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