【Third-person warning!】
I have already mentioned the change of pronouns before, so this time I will dedicate a separate chapter to explain it.
First of all, the purpose of choosing the first person when opening the book is to enhance the sense of substitution. Use "I am a fake contestant" to create the character "Xiao Se", and then slowly write about the changes in his mental journey to promote the development of the entire plot.
With 500,000 words written in the first person, the character image of "Desolate" can be considered full.
However, I also discovered some problems: the first person is prone to glitches.
What can the protagonist do?
Daily life, training, playing games, falling in love, if not, then fighting against the forces of match-fixing, and then? gone?
There were so few aspects that I could write about, so when I was writing some fake spinach plots, Xiao Se himself had to be present, which then gave rise to perceptions such as "Why does Xiao Se dare to go anywhere?" and "The plot and dialogue are awkward."
So after discussing with the editor, I decided to change my pronoun.
The first person may be easier to write in short stories, but I expect the number of words in the novel to be in the millions. It will be a lot less fun to always narrate around "I", such as Maybe, including Emo, Setsu and the like that will come out later.
The newcomer mid laner, because they conflict with the protagonist's position, it is impossible to form a team together, which will reduce a lot of scenes. I expect the D2 novel to be a group portrait system, rather than one person having the protagonist's halo to complete the game.
Some readers may be worried whether the original flavor will be lost after changing the person's pronoun, or whether the story will be written down. I can't guarantee whether it will be written down or not (it's almost done anyway), but my future narrative style will still revolve around "Desolation"
To unfold, the stories of other characters will be mentioned and will not take over the main role.
As for the competition, there is no need to worry, because the way I wrote the competition in the previous article is basically the same as the third person. It is just that there will be more audiences, commentators, players and even some reactions from the barrage in future chapters to serve as a foil.
Atmosphere. (A few days ago, I looked through the games I wrote about earlier and found a lot of low-level mistakes, such as level 2 Chen recruiting monsters, Void BKB’s front foot just opened and the back foot opened again... Hiss, I felt embarrassed when I looked back.
Be sure to pay more attention in the future.)
Many people are not used to switching from third person to first person, and I understand that. But when I switch from first person to third person, readers shouldn’t be used to it, right?
No way?
If so, let me apologize first.
Chapter completed!