My ideas are a bit messy, so I'll take a day off to make a detailed outline.

The rhythm has been bad recently and it's a bit slow. Several book friends pointed it out and he thought it was wrong.

So I will take a day off tomorrow to review the outline and work on the details.

Tomorrow I will get the rhythm back on track, reduce useless information, and focus on the interesting plot.

Thank you everyone for your continued reading and monthly votes!

Thank you very much!
Chapter completed!