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Remarks on Liyue

After more than a hundred chapters, the Liyue chapter has finally come to an end.

Compared with Mondstadt's journey, Liyue, as the hometown of the protagonist, shows things that are closer to daily life. Therefore, I created this article with the protagonist as the main core. Of course, the main core is not

It means that the main point of view is the protagonist. On the contrary, I used a large chapter of memories to describe the protagonist's past and his parents, and the protagonist did not even appear in that chapter. This is what some friends said

The branch line deviates from the main line.

In fact, this is because the author is not skilled enough to portray the protagonist's parents vividly in just a few chapters, so I can only use the stupidest method, which is to write more. If I write too much, I will always reach the passing mark.

Therefore, the extended questions are naturally a reflection of the author's lack of skill.

But even so, I have to spend a lot of pen and ink to describe this past, because this experience is the starting point of the protagonist, the source of his wishes, the basic logic of all his future actions, and the cornerstone of this book.

Therefore, if you have not read the past and core chapters, you can make up for it appropriately.

Otherwise, you may find it strange if the protagonist suddenly behaves differently in a certain episode.

The main purpose of the Liyue Chapter is to show the growth process of a young man, from escaping to facing and then having the courage to take responsibility. Therefore, this entire chapter is a chapter with the protagonist as the core. From a plot logic perspective, there is not much problem. It is just about the writing and ink.

It looks a bit strange due to the author's lack of skills, so I can only leave this to be corrected slowly in the future.

The overall plot flow of this volume is still roughly planned according to the main line, and all the characters that should appear have basically appeared once, but the perspective is placed on the protagonist, which will be different from the original perspective.

If I were to rate this chapter based on the portrayal of the protagonist, I could only give myself a six. If I were to rate the entire chapter, it would probably be even lower.

Because there are some glitches and insufficient writing power, and the long-term maintenance and update of inspiration may not keep up, overall it feels a little worse than the Mondstadt chapter, and I hope you can forgive me.

The first chapter of Liyue is almost over here. The next chapter will be mainly based on the original plot and deviate from the main line of the original game. In this volume, we will follow the protagonist back to Mondstadt and start a new chapter.

adventure.
Chapter completed!
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