When Ye Fan walked into Zhang Yang's office, he found that Zhang Yang was alone, so Ye Fan sat across from Zhang Yang and asked curiously: "Uncle, why are you alone here? Where are the screenwriters?"

?”

"You are here to see the manuscript, not the people." Zhang Yang explained patiently: "After you read the manuscript, you will determine which people have written well. Then I will meet with them. If you feel it is not good, you can still

Do you want to reject them in person? If the writing is not good, just let me tell them." After saying that, he handed the manuscript to Ye Fan.

Ye Fan patted his head, then took the manuscript and said, "Oh, I have forgotten this level. Uncle, you are so considerate, so let me take a look at the manuscript first." After that, he started to read it.

When Ye Fan was halfway through reading, he suddenly became excited. He paused, suppressed his inner excitement, and read on patiently. After a while, Ye Fan finished reading.

"Uncle, you have a very good taste. I think these are all well written, especially Sun Chao and Xue Qi. One seems to have studied the Yijing gossip, the other has a delicate writing style in describing stories and emotions, and the others

It seems that he is also quite proficient in martial arts novels, and his descriptions of moves are better." Ye Fan raised his head, as if a light bulb came on above his head, and said to Zhang Yang: "However, the overall style control is still lacking.

I think you still need to check it."

Zhang Yang also asked happily: "Is that okay?"

Ye Fan said excitedly: "I think Sun Chao and Xue Qi are good at writing the martial arts part, plus one or two moves to describe it. But I have new ideas and want to drastically change the outline of this novel.

, 1.1 million words is no longer enough, and there may not be enough people in this case."

Zhang Yang asked doubtfully: "You still need to make major changes? I think your work is already very good. Qi Jiguang also described the combination of Jianghu and history. Although you also mentioned the martial arts moves, your description was a bit exaggerated, isn't it?

Is it reasonable to write as much as possible when asked to write?”

"Uncle, please listen to me first. This is what I think. The original setting and characters are too thin, and the characters are not three-dimensional enough. The two protagonists have the same mother and father, and there is still a bit of "The Two Prides", and there is also a trip to Japan.

And Europa, is it a bit like "The Deer and the Cauldron"?" Ye Fan asked rhetorically: "And since it needs to be combined with history, the background of the writing is grand, and the growth path of the protagonist, I want to upgrade it, so I will talk about my story now.

Please give me your ideas for reference."

Zhang Yang also said seriously: "Okay, then you speak first and I listen."

Seeing this, Ye Fan said in a deep voice: "First of all, since the two protagonists already exist in "Two Protagonists", we might as well make a breakthrough and write three protagonists."

"Three protagonists? Isn't that "Tian Long Ba Bu"?" Zhang Yang asked doubtfully: "The situation feels similar."

Ye Fan replied: "No, it's different from "Tian Long Ba Bu". The three protagonists of "Cang Hai", in addition to Lu Jian and Gu Zhen, Yao Qing, in addition to being the first heroine, also have to play additional roles to become another

One protagonist, so there are two men and one woman.”

"There are still emotional entanglements between the three of them. The half-father setting remains unchanged, but there are additional emotional entanglements between Lu Jian, Yao Qing, and Gu Zhen."

"In addition to his simple and honest personality, Lu Jian also needs to add passion and optimism. Even if he went to Japan and was refined as a slave, his temperament is still optimistic, but he is also tough-minded, controlling Ning Bu Kong, and would rather die than surrender... Later, he inherited

Lord of West City…”

"Gu Zhen is the young master of the East Island. He is smart and proud. After being framed, his character gradually darkened. He was rescued by Lu Jian and was infected by his character. They traveled together in the world, but the two were cold and hot... He was killed by his biological father, but not

He knew that his father had deliberately let him fake his death, and although he was exonerated, he gradually turned dark... and finally won the East Island and became the Lord of the East Island..."

"Yao Qing's main character remains unchanged, and the plot will be adjusted later. Although she has a crush on Lu Jian, after meeting Lu Jian again, she gets to know Gu Zhen, and Gu Zhen is also attracted to her... After becoming a disciple of Earth Mother Wen Dai

Later, he was taught medical skills and used medicine to refine the body, and he achieved great success in medical skills and life skills (physical training)... Later, due to emotional entanglements, he returned to his hometown to restore Yaojiazhuang..."

"The name of the villain Wan Guizang is too simple. Since it combines historical background and business background, let's change it to Wang Zhi. He has experience in doing business and going overseas, and he has also rebelled and established a political power.

The person is very suitable for the setting of hiding the big BOSS...Wang Zhi’s martial arts should be written at a higher level, so that the protagonists in the three places can fight against each other and use their own skills."

"The last two brothers, Gu Zhen and Lu Jian, joined hands and, with the help of Yao Qing, realized the magical power and defeated Wang Zhi..."

"In the middle, they escape from the rivers and lakes, go to Japan and Europe, and take a boat from the sea. In line with the age of navigation at that time, their adventures at sea, including some supporting characters, can be written in a more exciting and three-dimensional way, and then based on the adventure experience

, comprehend the martial arts that suits you from your own martial arts inheritance, and describe a detailed growth process. After returning, add plots such as the dispute between the East and the West, the discussion of Tao and the destruction of gods, and the final adventure to find the Eight Pictures. The ending is finally

If the world is at peace, it will be even more exciting."

Zhang Yang felt dizzy when he heard Ye Fan's giggling words, so he waved his hand and said, "Xiao Fan, please stop talking now. What you want to change is not just a little bit. Gu Zhen and Lu Jian are in trouble."

Fortunately, the character you set up, Yao Qing, is not very likable in the first place. You have to develop feelings for two men. You must know that most of the people who write martial arts novels are men. Doesn't this make male readers uncomfortable?

There is a heroine who goes to practice bodybuilding? This is not what a heroine should look like, so why did you suddenly think of changing so many things? The new plot is indeed more interesting, but it is much different from the outline you wrote before. You just

That said, I can't write it at all. If you want to change it, you have to rewrite the outline first."

"Don't I want you to give me some advice on this? Let's discuss Yao Qing's settings and adjust them. I just think it will be interesting for the heroine to train and knock away the enemies with one punch." Ye Fan listened.

When Zhang Yang said this and explained it, he realized that he was a little bit arrogant, and pointed at Sun Chao's manuscript and said: "The main reason is that I saw the settings of the Eight Trigrams of the Book of Changes written by him, which are very detailed and interesting, so I

I thought about turning "Cang Hai" into a martial arts universe series."

Zhang Yang asked doubtfully: "Martial Arts Universe Series?"

"Yes, that is to say, it is not just the protagonists. Since this novel has so many group scenes and I am not writing it alone, why not combine our traditional culture, create different forces and martial arts, and also write some interesting supporting characters

Let's make it more exciting and create a martial arts series. In this background, there are great voyages and the Japanese Warring States period. There are many characters and plots that can be written. It can be much better to write a separate spin-off." Ye Fan replied, but in his heart

I'm thinking: 'If I hadn't seen Sun Chao's Yi Jing Bagua written so well, it reminded me of Baguazhang and Bamen Dunjia, and I wouldn't have thought of the plots of "Five Villages Fighting" and "Pirate King" one after another. Isn't this just right?

Integrate the setting into "Canghai"?'

Zhang Yang shook his head and said: "Your setting is too big. There are not enough people now. So, you go back and change the outline first. I will look for people after reading it. At present, I will start with these few."

Stay and wait until you finish writing, then come over and explain your idea to them, so that they can write it."

"Okay, then I'll go back and write now, revise the outline as soon as possible, and come over to discuss it together." After Ye Fan finished speaking, he stood up and left, going home to continue typing.

Ye Fan, who returned home, was excited all over. The comics of "Naruto" and "Pirate King" have not been released yet. Add these settings to "Canghai". This novel only needs to be written well and has several million words.

It may not be enough. As long as it is successful, comics and animations can be published one by one, and some theatrical versions can be released in theaters. It will definitely be a hen that can lay golden eggs. "The Sea" can become the most popular movie in Ye Fan's life.

A successful novel.

What? "Tomb Robbers' Notes" and "Ghost Blowing the Lamp"? After all, they are ready-made novels, which are easier to integrate. "Canghai" plus "Five Villages Fighting" and "Pirate King" are no ordinary projects.

After thinking about it, Ye Fan began to code hard, deleting and changing, changing and deleting. Finally, a week later, Ye Fan finally finished writing the settings.

After getting the preliminary outline in hand, Ye Fan contacted Zhang Yang and set off for Huayi.

When Zhang Yang got the outline and read it again, he was sometimes excited and sometimes frowned.

After reading the outline, Zhang Yang looked at Ye Fan and said: "Xiao Fan, the settings you have changed are too big. Not only do Europa and Japan need to have training system settings, but also the Inca, Maya, and Aztec over there in the Americas.

Do you want to include the Croatian civilization? It’s easier to write about the domestic dynasties. But if you want to write about the era abroad, the information you need to check will not be enough.”

"Isn't this just a preliminary idea? So instead of asking if you have any good ideas, uncle, don't you want to discuss it with the screenwriters?" Ye Fan shrugged and said, "I don't know when to write this alone.

I don’t know if it can be finished and what it will look like in the end, so I might as well ask Sun Chao and the others to come over and discuss it together.”

Zhang Yang rubbed his forehead and said, "That's all we can do. I'll call someone over. You sit down and wait." After that, he got up and went out.

Ye Fan nodded, thought again, and said to Zhang Yang who walked to the door: "Uncle, I am going to ask for 20% of the royalties for this novel. The copyright is still mine, but the royalties for you can be mentioned.

8%."

Zhang Yang stopped when he heard this, turned around and said with a headache: "Why are you so busy? Now the top writer's royalties are only 15%, and you still want 20%. Why don't you go to heaven? Stop talking nonsense now, wait.

Write it down and tell me." After saying that, he hurried out, fearing that Ye Fan would say something disturbing again.

After a while, Zhang Yang walked in with four people.

After Zhang Yang's introduction, in addition to Sun Chao and Xue Qi, the other two were named Yu Zhenyong and Wan Shaoguang. Ye Fan nodded and said hello.

The four of them are all relatively young. Sun Chao wears glasses, is tall and thin, and looks like a scholar; Xue Qi is good-looking and intellectually dressed, while Yu Zhenyong and Wan Shaoguang look more ordinary.

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At this time, Zhang Yang showed the outline to the four people and read them one by one. Ye Fan began to explain his settings and ideas to everyone, and gave everyone answers one by one, until Ye Fan's mouth was dry and he drank all the tea.

After drinking two bottles, I finally explained it clearly.

Then Sun Chao and the other four began to discuss among themselves. Ye Fan listened with great interest at first, and sighed in his heart: 'As expected of us all young people, their ideas are so novel, and the content is enriched by talking.'

But later on, everyone emphasized their own views, expressed their opinions, and gradually started arguing. Fortunately, Ye Fan and Zhang Yang were both there, and they quickly suppressed the situation when they saw something was wrong.

However, the noise coming from inside the office still aroused the thoughts of people outside.

After Jin Lihong heard the news, she rushed to Zhang Yang's office, looked at the situation, and felt relieved when she saw that nothing happened.

But after she understood what happened, she looked at Ye Fan's outline, sat down on the main seat, and started thinking.

Ye Fan and the others didn't say anything, they just looked at Jin Lihong, ready to listen to her thoughts.

After a while, Jin Lihong looked at everyone and said slowly: "Although Xiao Fan's novel has a large setting and is difficult to write, I read the outline and found that as long as it is well written, it will not only be suitable for teenagers, but

The market for adults is not small, and it has created a new generation of martial arts novel style with great potential."

After saying this, Jin Lihong paused and said firmly: "If you want to write this novel, you must write it. You write the domestic content first. As for the foreign content, let the people in the agency who usually have nothing to do help find the information. If it is not enough, I will

I still have some contacts who should be able to help, but Xiaofan, you can’t just be a hands-off shopkeeper. When you have time, you have to come over often to come and come up with ideas. There is also the final review, and I will also review it. Is this okay?”

Finally, he looked towards Ye Fan.

Ye Fan saw this and said with a smile: "Aunt Jin, I really appreciate your help and review. If there is a problem, just do as you say. If nothing happens, I will come over often to cooperate."

Jin Lihong nodded with satisfaction, chatted with everyone for a while, and then left.

So Ye Fan and others reached a consensus after one last discussion. Zhang Yang followed Sun Chao's style and assigned tasks according to the outline. Let several people work together to complete the setting of the outline, unify and perfect it bit by bit, and then start.

Write this novel.

With this arrangement, although it will take longer and the writing will be slower, the final quality will definitely be guaranteed.

When Ye Fan saw the final result, he nodded with satisfaction and promised Zhang Yang that he would improve the outline and write part of the content when he went back, and then he was allowed to leave.

Although the current results are different from Ye Fan's original intention, which has virtually added a certain amount of workload to Ye Fan, Ye Fan's psychological satisfaction is immeasurable.

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I have read the general plot of "The Big Blue", but I don't know much about the details, so I want to add the settings of "Naruto" and "One Piece" to make some magical changes. I will read "The Big Blue" when I have time and pick out some details for the adaptation.
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