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46 Liuli was said to cry(1/2)

After Honda Liuli changed into men's clothing, put on a wig, and repeatedly confirmed that there was no problem with her outfit, she slowly walked towards the cottage of Senior Sister Mai.

While walking, she found that the sight that had been stuck on her in the past disappeared. She was wearing a mask and glasses and was fully armed, but she was just an ordinary "boy" and would not attract anyone's attention.

This feeling...

Very good, very free.

She began to try a more reckless way of walking, no longer like in the past, and always kept the dignity and elegance that the young lady should have.

Xia usually likes to jump and jump. Although she always laughs at her, she is actually very envious...I really want to try it once...

Liuli jumped a little and stopped immediately.

"No...it's true." The face covered by the mask has begun to heat up and turn red.

A little shameful.

The breeze blew, and the glass blew across the bushes beside me, and we approached the hut of Senior Sister Shiyi step by step.

For a long time, this place will be as quiet as ever and feel comfortable.

"Kenjiro, are you here?" Mai Tooya stood at the door of the cottage and waved at Honda Ryuri.

Liuli lowered her head awkwardly, then waved her hand.

"Senior Sister Mai...The name of Kenjiro Matsumoto..."

"Is it very masculine?" said Mai Tooya smiled.

Because she was already dressed as a man, it was naturally impossible to tell her real name. After many discussions, Honda Ryuri adopted the one-time kana name Kenjiro Matsumoto at the suggestion of Senior Sister Matsumoto.

"Well...well." Liuli turned her head and didn't want to complain.

"Kenjiro, go to the back garden quickly. He is already waiting for you." Mai Tooya said with a smile.

"Okay." Liuli's eyes sterned, she coughed twice, adjusted her voice, and followed her over.

Not far away, a black-haired boy in a uniform and sitting in a very upright position was admiring the flowers. He had not turned around yet, so he could only see the back of his head.

"Kayajun, the guest is here~"

Upon hearing this, Kazuya of Shingu got up quickly, then turned around stiffly, showing a guilty smile to Liuri, "Hello, my name is Kazuya of Miyahara, I'm very happy to know you."

The reason why Shingu and Ya use kana is different from that of Liuli. He was just because he was guilty and was afraid of being scolded or having conflicts with the other party, which embarrassed Senior Mai. So after consulting Senior Mai, he received advice and he also used a one-time pseudonym.

Anyway, it should be just a meeting once, and it is good for both parties not to report their real names.

Kazuya Kinyu also agreed with the statement of Senior Sister Mai.

"Kenjiro?" Seeing that Ruri was still in place, Mai Tooya shook her hands up and down in front of her.

“Hey, hey~”

"Oh, oh, hello, my name is Kenjiro Matsumoto. I'm meeting for the first time. Please give me some advice." After Liuri came to her senses, she replied in a hoarse and slight voice.

"Kenjiro has had a severe cold recently, so he can only wear a mask and speak at such a volume. Kazuyajun, please forgive me~" Tatsuya Mai put out a cover at the right time.

"It's okay." Kazuya Kazuya nodded with a smile, thinking in her heart: I'm having a serious cold and can't help but come to me to match? And he doesn't look at me at all, do you really hate me...

"Then, I won't bother you two anymore. Let's chat slowly. Call me if you need it~" Tooya Mai blinked at Kazuya, and left with a smile.

"Then...please sit..." Kazuya Kanya squeezed out a smile and pulled open the chair.

Liuli looked at him now, nodded, and slowly sat down.

It's really...how could it be this guy?

Should I say I am lucky or unlucky?

And he just skipped his class in the morning.

The book review also said a lot of unpleasant words...

Liuli's heart was in a mess, and she forgot about the original draft of the book, and didn't know how to start the topic.

After both sides were silent for a full minute, Kazuya and Liuli spoke at the same time:

"that…"

"I."

"You talk first."

"You first."

“…”

“…”

"Then I'll do it first." Kazuya Shingu felt that if this continues, it would be abortion. This extremely awkward atmosphere was really uncomfortable.

He lowered his head slightly to Liuli and said in a earnest tone: "I'm really sorry, that night because I was anxious to complete your task and read the complete book... There were indeed many things that stimulated me, so I wrote such an ignorant comment. I'm really sorry."

"..." Liuli felt even worse as she listened to his apology and with her sincere guilty eyes. "Why do you want to apologize?"

"Ah?" Kazuya of Khan was also stunned.

This answer was something he didn't expect.

"The good or bad of a book is left to readers to judge. I have no objection to your negative reviews, and you don't need to apologize to me. If I don't even have this little tolerance, I don't deserve to call it the author." Liuli said in a deep voice.

"Then..." Kazuya of the Shrine was also confused. Then why did you stare at me with such cold eyes?

"Sorry, I was thinking about something just now, so I was stunned for a while. Please rest assured, I have no dissatisfaction with you. On the contrary, I have several questions to discuss with you this time and want to find you to solve your doubts." Liuli returned to her calmness. No matter who the other party was, she should not forget the purpose of this visit.

Talk about works and find directions for improvement, without involving any private matters.

"It's okay without so many honorifics..." Kazuya Shinguchi also had a headache when he heard his complicated honorifics stacked up.

It seems that this author is even more special than he thinks.

Originally, he thought that most of the people who could write such works were naive and optimistic...

"Then... Miyahara classmate, first of all, is about what I wrote in my book. People in the slums are willing to share and help each other. You questioned this... but you didn't say it out, I want to hear your complete opinion."

"Well..." Kazuya Kanya saw the other party's attitude and gradually felt relieved, so he asked seriously: "Matsumoto, do you think that slums are like this. The weak are helping each other and keep warm together?"

"...Isn't it? Otherwise, how can people in slums survive? In times of difficulty, only by gathering all the power that can be used can we overcome it... That's what I think."

"..." Kazuya Kanya looked at the golden badge on her body and smiled bitterly, "Matsumoto-kun, what you said is indeed good, but have you ever thought that when someone really encounters difficulties, these slums will not only not help, but will also bite you back."

"As you described in, when you are extremely hungry, you will think of a neighbor who wants to share a piece of food for others to eat, and it will not exist at all."

"...But, I want to describe the kind side of these people... I want to compare with the nobles inside." Liuli frowned slightly and said.

“So that’s the distortion I mentioned in the book review.”

"Although the world and characters in the book are all created by the author, they must not deviate from reality too much. If they are distorted, they will not resonate with readers. At least I am like this. After seeing these unreasonable parts in your article, I suddenly feel like I lost interest... Even when the sisters reunited, there was no emotional fluctuation."

"...Matsumoto Jun, I'm talking straightforward, you won't be angry, right?" As soon as Kazuya of Shenmiao finished speaking, he found that he was in a state again. He quickly looked at Liuli and asked carefully.

Liuli shook her head gently and said, "I said it, I don't care. Please continue to express your opinions, which are of great reference value."

"Then, how should I write to achieve the same effect?" Liuli looked at Kazuya, the god of the temple and asked.

"If you want to reflect the truth, goodness and beauty of slums, you can divide the people in it into two factions of good and evil, and the place where your sister is is in the good, so she is cultivated into that naive, romantic, optimistic and cheerful personality."

"The two factions of good and evil...that is, I also write a comparison inside the slums?"

"Yes, at least you can't just stop writing. This way, everyone is written as good people. If you lack plot conflicts, it will make people feel that it's fake..."

"Okay, thank you for your suggestions... I will think carefully. There is another question, which is why do you think... sister is a character who complains without any reason?" Liuli began to become nervous when she asked this question.

Because the role of the sister in the book is based on herself, denying the role of the sister is equivalent to denying herself.

So she wanted to know the reason anyway.

Kazuya of the Shrine heard this and pondered for a moment.

"I think it's mainly because... you portray too little of your sister and too much of your sister, and the final result is from the imbalance of the roles of the two protagonists."

"Sister went to the slum, and you focused on describing the various events that my sister encountered, including joy and sorrow, discomfort in the beginning of slum life, and the changes after adapting later."

"But there is no description of this on my sister's side. When you come up, you write that my sister is overwhelmed by her daily schoolwork and various banquet affairs. She doesn't even write about her sister, going to the big family, and being happy."

"The joyful side?" Liuli really felt that her studies were heavy and she was so tired that she couldn't breathe. What joy should she have...?

"Didn't the first time the poor went to the rich's homes to sigh, wow, this home is so big and beautiful, and there are many things that I haven't seen before, I feel novel?"

"Isn't this description just joy?"

"You can sleep in a larger bed and eat better food. The little changes in daily life add up to a huge change. However, your sister's role in the article is intruded by heavy studies and chores."

"Compare this, are the scenes of the two sisters very uneven?"

Liuli felt a sudden enlightenment when listening to the story that Shengong Kazuya told him. Many aspects that he had not noticed before were analyzing them bit by bit.

This person... seems to be... quite awesome.

"But, I still don't understand why my sister is moaning without any illness? My sister adapted to the life of the slum faster and was even willing to give up her identity as a eldest lady to pursue freedom. Doesn't this mean that my sister... regards money as dirt?" Liuli still had something in her mind. She put her hands on the table, obviously a little more excited than before.

"..." Kazuya Shinguya couldn't help but shake his head and laugh.

While Liuli was a little confused, she was also aroused a little anger. She was the kind of person who was very difficult to get angry, but at this moment she was still angry by the ridiculous smile of Kazuya, the god-like smile.
To be continued...
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