After Luo Yu left the group, he searched for books about the authors who could remember her names and read them.

In about half an hour, after scanning a few books, she looked confused.

Your sister!

Except for that book "The Immortal Path", none of them know it!

It’s obvious that I have already written about cultivation, but the plot is as slow as martial arts!

Are they all mentally retarded?!

What's going on with the strong sense of martial arts in those books!!?

Also writing about cultivation!?

Write about you Pipi shrimp!

So she directly sent a message in the group, "I have probably picked up a few of your books."

Fengyu Xiaoyao: "How big is it!?"

Deep Blue: "Where is mine? Have you seen mine??"

Luo Yu: "I read it. Except for the book "The Immortal Path", the rest can be cut and rewritten..."

Fengyu Xiaoyao: "Hahaha."

Authors: "…"

Looking at the string of ellipsis in the group, the depressed Luo Yu directly turned on the 'keyboard warrior' mode.

"I'll say that. You claim to be writing about cultivation, but I look like I'm wearing cultivation martial arts..."

"Take the book "Cultivation God" as an example. If you don't mention the others, just say that the name is so rustic..."

"I'm a god, you're a good guy! Can we give you a heart-wrenching name?"

"If you practice the truth, just practice the truth. Don't hold on to martial arts anymore!"

Li Wei was trembling at the moment, looking at the news on the screen. He was tired of seeing his book title being criticized for being so sloppy. Speaking of which, the name was completely his passion at the time. He was anxious and opened a new book without even the main text. Even he felt that it was rusty. Although Canglang had complained about the book title before, he would not be timid about Canglang.

Now...

"Boss is right! I'll look for the editor to change the title of the book!"

Canglang: "Hahahahaha, Lao Dao, I just said that your book title is a piece of earth and I don't listen to it. I have to silently say that you are convinced. You have to change the book title, don't change it, hurry up and cut it."

Lao Dao: "Get out, don't interrupt. The boss just said that except for the book Xiaoyao Master, we have to cut it, and you are the same! Listen carefully! @Yuluo silently, please continue."

Luo Yu: "You only have five chapters in new books now. Although there are not many, I can probably see that you plan to let the protagonist practice hard and then enter the world of cultivation?"

Lao Dao: "Uh, isn't it?"

Luo Yu: "To your sister! Who would like to see the protagonist keep practicing hard?? It's said that it's not your previous delay in martial arts, why do you practice hard all day long!"

The old knife, who was trembling by Luo Yu, replied weakly: "But your star change begins, isn't it also the plot of Qin Yu's hard-working external skills..."

Luo Yu: "..."

Old knife "?"

Luo Yu: "Are you imitating the transformation of stars?"

Lao Dao: "Uh, that, yes..."

Looking at the other party's reply, Luo Yu looked speechless, so he questioned mercilessly.

"Did you just see Qin Yu practicing hard?? Are you really a master of online literature?? You didn't find that the protagonist in the early stage of the Star Transformation is different from ordinary people?"

At this time, Fengyu said, "I am useless, others practice internal skills, Qin Yu practices external skills."

Chu Yun was proud at this moment, after all, only his book was approved by Luo Yu.

Seeing this news, Luo Yu expressed appreciation, "He was right! Although Qin Yu was also practicing hard, you should know that Qin Yu practiced hard originally with external skills that were much worse than internal skills, and finally reached a state that could not be achieved by internal skills. This is the pleasure. In addition, the most important thing is that Qin Yu has golden fingers."

All authors: "Golden Finger?"

Seeing that the author in the group was still confused about Golden Finger, Luo Yu decided to give these guys some lessons!

"That's right! Qin Yu's golden fingers are meteor tears and star transformation techniques.

These two things are like cheating, which can allow the protagonist to grow and show off quickly. Your martial arts are at most magical weapons, and you also have to write a very long plot for the protagonist to compete for it.

I understand this, do you have to count the words of water? But don’t be so slow in practicing cultivation!

Because there are too many similar things in the cultivation system, such as elixirs, magic weapons, martial arts, formations, divine beasts, secret treasures, etc., take a good look at the description of the cultivation system in the Star Transformation!

Any one of those things is enough for you to have a hundred thousand words of water.

These are more extensible than martial arts, and they can all be an excellent help for the protagonist.

I have read a few of your books, except for the protagonist of the book "The Immortal Path", which has a very powerful fairy sword.

I didn’t have any other golden fingers, and I just wanted to let the protagonist practice hard and upgrade. I asked if your protagonist was given a fee for the phone bill?

I used to forget that I didn’t have these things in martial arts, but now I’ll hurry up if I have them!"

Lao Dao: "But, big guy, my protagonist has a very awesome sword at the beginning!"

Seeing what Lao Dao said, Luo Yu was simply unable to complain.

"You're so embarrassed to call me hang..."

"The broken sword setting can't even be found in the cultivation world. You can check out the magic sword setting of the protagonist in "Immortal Path" by yourself. Compare your broken sword to throw it to the recycling station!"

Lao Dao: "..."

Luo Yu: "So, I will call them all and rewrite them! I don't even have any hangings, so why do I write about cultivation!"

Deep Blue: "Big Boss, but won't you upgrade too quickly? Although there are so many realms of cultivation, if you rely on the hijacking to quickly upgrade, you won't be able to write it to the Mahayana period soon?"

Luo Yu rolled her eyes when the other party said, mentally retarded!

No wonder readers in this world have become so crazy about the stars. How can these great authors not be popular?

I deserve to be beaten by the stars!

If you have the brains of cultivating your true nature, can’t you go up one more?

So Luo Yu replied: "Have I said that the end of cultivation is the Mahayana period?"

Authors: "…"

"You can ascend to the immortal world after the Mahayana period is over! Change the map!"

Lao Dao: "Damn it! How can I write about the fairy world??? This, this, this is unreasonable??"

"Why is it unreasonable? In addition to powerful power, cultivation is originally a requirement for immortality, so why can't we ascend to the fairy world??"

"Let's not talk about cultivation. Even your martial arts, you can set a realm of broken voids in the later stage. At that time, let the protagonist go to a brand new map. This map is full of people who have entered the realm of broken voids before. Will the protagonist have written some when he reaches this environment??"

All authors: "What?? Martial arts can also break the void?"

"Why can't it be!?" Luo Yu said contemptuously. These people's brains were completely limited to the classic martial arts system for too long and could not make any breakthroughs!

However, they cannot be blamed. The martial arts and void in the previous life was originally an extremely classic concept proposed by Master Huang Yi, which pushed martial arts to an extremely high state. Even the cultivation system in the online literature industry later spread from this concept.

In addition, these authors have been bound in the martial arts system before, and when they first wrote about the type of cultivation, they naturally couldn't let go.

At this time, Butterfly Sword suddenly sent a message.

"Big Boss, let alone cultivation, these things are not talented, so they can go back and rewrite them quickly. Look at the time travel I wrote!"

Deep Blue: "@Butterfly Sword, you are shameless. At the beginning, you were so shameless that you said that the niche articles would definitely fail. Now you are shameless and go to write about the big guy's time travel theme!"

Butterfly Sword: "Don't interrupt if you die, hurry up and cut your book. @无未分有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有有

After posting this sentence, Butterfly Sword looked at the news in the group expecting to get Luo Yu's approval.

However……

Luo Yu: "Well, just like that, you cut it too."

All authors: "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha."

Butterfly Sword: "MMP..."

Butterfly Sword: "Why, Big Big? "Cry""

"If you write time travel, just write about the protagonist traveling alone! What's wrong with you doing a few things together? Are you playing cards together? Time travelers are all gathered together, and you still have the nerve to call it "Time Travel: I'm the Awesome", you're so awesome!"

"Can't we let the protagonist pretend to be alone quietly??"

Luo Yu rolled his eyes and replied, "This man was completely hitting the poisonous point of time travel, and he would be sorry for time travel if he didn't scold him.

Seeing Luo Yu's reply, Butterfly Sword was trembling. When he was excited when he saw this time travel, he wrote that several people would wear it together, thinking that the plot of the protagonist fighting with other time travelers would be more exciting.

However, I didn't expect that the silent boss would be directly evaluated as poisonous...

Heartbroken...
Chapter completed!