However, the situation in the comment section is a bit different from what Chen Ming thought.

"I can't understand it, I feel like I'm writing a lot."

"+, I didn't want to read the theme of Journey to the West, but I just came to see it because it was written by Xiaoyu. As a result, I felt that the beginning of the article was in a fog. Why did Sun Wukong kill Tang Seng? And I felt that Sun Wukong's behavior was very inconsistent, but I was fascinated."

"I always feel that Xiaoyu's novel is a bit conscious, and it's a Journey to the West type of romance?"

"Oh, I want to see Kun and Peng written by Xiaoyu. The article in the October magazine next door borrowed Xiaoyu's setting. It was very exciting. I don't want to watch Journey to the West."

"I feel that the opening timeline is very jumping, and I feel a little uncomfortable to read it back and forth, but Xiaoyu's writing style is really great."

Seeing these comments, Chen Ming couldn't help frowning.

He originally wanted to come to the comment section to find a sense of identity. After all, he had a very high evaluation of the beginning of this article, but he didn't expect that he would have so many disliked?

However, after thinking about it, he could understand that not everyone is subject to his patience and reading literacy.

For example, the person who said that Sun Wukong was inconsistent in his behavior, in Chen Ming's opinion, this was just a pit dug at the beginning, and everything will definitely be explained in a reasonable way later.

And that's exactly what's the truth.

In fact, in the Legend of Wukong, Sun Wukong was divided into two for some reason.

One has memories of his previous life, he is still the lawless monster who fights against gods and Buddhas, while the other one has the memory removed, brought a golden hoop, and followed Tang Monk to the West to obtain scriptures.

At the end of the story, the Wukong with a golden hoop also recovered his memory, found his true self, and resisted the authority of gods and Buddhas at the cost of life.

However, apart from these negative comments, many readers still gave extremely high comments.

Readers with id "Blue Stone" commented: "First of all, let alone the plot, this article is far from the style of the author. With this style, I will follow up even if I tell a boring story. But then again, is it really boring? I saw Xiaoyu saying that she would adapt. At first I thought it would be boring, but after reading the opening, I didn't think so. This is a brand new story, the character portrayal is extremely outstanding, and even Tang Monk is no longer a burden to only shout for help. In the story line of the opening story line, he becomes flesh and blood. There is a deep past behind each character. It can be seen that Xiaoyu has put in a lot of effort. The story is constantly interspersed and backwards in the cause and effect. I am looking forward to the development of the plot. Leave a message here. When the serialization ends, it will be the day of this book's destiny!"

The reader 'Time Traveler' commented: "All the lines are classic, and any sentence is thought-provoking. Even with these classic lines, I have been able to follow this book!"

Reader 'Meng Yuxi' commented: "I laughed when I saw someone saying that the structure was messy. I was afraid that these people's Chinese language was taught by the physical education teacher, so where was it messy? I think it's clear that since the beginning of the story, when Wukong killed Tang Sanzang, the story has been told in chronological order. This is the main line, but the 'anterior cause' is constantly inserted on the main line, and these 'anterior cause' seems chaotic, but they are completely serving the main line. Wherever the main line develops, these 'anterior cause' is constantly added as a supplement to fill the background and story of the characters. It can be seen that Xiaoyu has done a lot of effort in this regard, and the story behind everyone is also very exciting. I really don't understand whether you, those who are messy, have read novels seriously."

Seeing these positive comments, Chen Ming was relieved.

It seems that there are still readers who know the knowledge.

As for those who say they can't understand, Chen Ming believes that this is only temporary.

After all, there are relatively few readers as patient as him. For most people, if a serialization starts, there will naturally be no good comments.

In fact, if it is written by a new author, then probably not many people will pay attention to the beginning of this stream of consciousness. Only readers who really like it will come to comment.

However, Luo Yu's extremely high popularity has brought her a lot of traffic, which has led to many readers who did not read magazines and have also come to subscribe to this serial, so there are those negative comments.

In Chen Ming's opinion, there is great potential. Even though the story has just begun, he has reason to think that when the follow-up story comes out, this adaptation of Journey to the West will definitely become a classic adaptation of Journey to the West.

...

A few days later, as more and more people read the beginning of this serial, the online evaluations also became polarized.

The literary readers who like it are extremely popular with it. The literary style and classic lines that are so exquisite that these literary readers can't put it down and feel like they have gained a treasure.

In their opinion, Luo Yu used the technique of stream of consciousness to rewrite Journey to the West, reinterpreting the original cliché story, and defining the characters in it twice. Although there is only one beginning now, he has dug countless holes and laid a huge situation. Only when the whole series is completed will this novel reflect its true charm.

Readers who don’t like it think that setting up suspense at the beginning is just a mystery, and coupled with the stream of consciousness-style writing, it is simply incomparable to readers.

Among these people who don’t like Luo Yu, there are also readers of Luo Yu’s online literature. They read this serial because of Luo Yu’s name. As a result, the obscure description and chaotic interlude at the beginning made these people complain that the silent cute girl didn’t write online literature well and went to play with the literary youth’s stream of consciousness.

This article is not a bit exciting, and it has always been very depressing at the beginning, which makes ordinary readers feel a little overwhelmed.

In this case, the article "Chang Ge" gradually became popular due to its novel settings and high readability plot, and the comments were applauded.

The sales of magazines continue to rise. Although the sales of magazines have also increased with the support of Luo Yu fans, it is still quite far from that.

However, the magazine editors were very calm at this moment.

In fact, they had long foreseeed such mixed reviews of the beginning.

It is a literary and philosophical story, and it is also a story that can only be understood when you see the ending. This type of thing will always be effective in the later stage. In their opinion, this serialization is definitely capable of subverting Journey to the West and becoming a classic masterpiece.

Therefore, when the serialization ends, it is the day when they overtake.

Under this mentality, the negative reviews online have not affected the editors of the magazine department at all.
Chapter completed!