So far, what you readers have said most is that there are too many problems with ordinary plots. The reason for this problem is mainly caused by three aspects: First, ordinary itself lacks experience and knowledge, and his ability to control the plot is still poor; second, ordinary people are not prepared for the work; third, ordinary people have taken a major turn in the orientation of the work; after these few points, this has caused this situation. Seeing the readers so carefully pointing out the problems in the book, ordinary people are very excited. Here, ordinary people are thankful for their attention to ordinary works.

Since the problem has already occurred, we need to find a way to solve it. Young Man will pay attention to these problems in future chapters and try to reduce such mistakes. As for the previous one, wait until Young Man finishes writing this novel before changing it. Do you think? Thank you again!

In the third episode, the new settings of the article will come out. This is also an effort by ordinary people to try to imitate fantasy in such fictional novels. After all, everyone has read many modern people in ancient times defeated the ancients with modern industry and weapons. If ordinary people also wrote this way, ordinary people would think it would be meaningless, let alone others. ordinary people will now involve modern industry in the article, but it will not push the technology of the time to a great height at once. Not to mention what the consequences would be if the fleet was turned into modern steel warships and used ancient sails to power? Therefore, ordinary people would express this modern technology in the article in a way that would not make the weapons at that time extremely powerful.

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□ It is very mysterious. As a modern soldier, in that era of cold weapons, there should be something that others don’t have. First of all, in terms of weapon manufacturing. As a special force, the structure of weapons is many times higher than that of ordinary soldiers, and has high attainments in drawings. As a royal family, he has more privileges than others, and it is even easier to do some things. Even if he is the prince and the only royal bloodline, he cannot go to the battle casually!! King Cobra

Answer: You are right. Because of my first time writing, I don’t have a good grasp of some things, especially my historical knowledge is still lacking. I will try my best to make up for this problem in the future. Thank you!

□ What is the relationship between the introduction and this book? I also want to know...at least I haven't seen any relationship so far. Ling Jian-

□¡ Get rid of it. Which kind-hearted person explains to which temple General Tianwu was. Why did he never appear afterwards? Emperor N of Tang

□¡ Get rid of it. Which kind-hearted person explains to which temple General Tianwu was. Why did he never appear afterwards? Emperor N of Tang

Answer: This temple was specially created for the third episode and will be released soon.

□ Hey, I only learned that there is another book with the same nature and similar plot as me. They are all novels with a history, and they are all Song Dynasty. Why is it so coincidental? Pain. Finally, the sense of security

Answer: What is the name of your book? Can you tell me about it? Let’s talk to everyone.

□ The book is well written, but it is trapped in the cliché of the protagonist being able to do everything and picking up girls. Mu Hu

Answer: At the beginning, this book was self-entertainment, so I wrote it in this aspect. I will pay attention to the ordinary later. Except for the ordinary that is set for the protagonist, the rest of the women are not so easy to do. Please continue to pay attention!

□ These chapters seem to be completely out of touch with the previous ones, and they are extremely chaotic! Yingyu

□ I saw this book being included in the strong recommended version, which should be good. I saw the author introduce that the source of this book was a novel called "Zhong". I was so dizzy. I can only blame me for being a little bit of knowledge. I have never heard of this book. There are Chinese people who have risen again. After searching, none of them were called "Zhong" alone. I was depressed. Blind Crane Chasing the Sun

□ After reading it in one breath, I was embarrassed about the previous question. I deeply agree with Zhang Sir's opinion downstairs. If you want to write martial arts, you must be cold weapons. There is also such a view that only represents the readers' meaning. I still hope that the author will write it according to his own ideas. It is a good book and has been put on the shelf. Blind Crane Chasing the Sun

□ So far, the author’s biggest problem is that he doesn’t know who the protagonist is in his writing! The protagonist is a special force soldier, a prince, not a gangster in the 21st century! As the prince, he calls himself “me”, not a “lone”, is he trying to kill his master? The Taifu is a high-ranking official with a high prestige in the court. How can a man from the Mo family take responsibility? Since he is the Taifu, he is the imperial court appointed by the imperial court, and has privately friends with nobles of the enemy country, or even privately entering the enemy country, do you really think that the emperor dare not kill his nine clans? Zhang Sir

□ The more I wrote it, it got worse and worse. What happened to attack was simply far-fetched. A few people could fight a troops of hundreds of people, and they could catch people and run away. Then what army would be needed? Just practice martial arts. Even if you don’t form a formation, you can kill more than 100 people, and 100 people could kill a troops of ten thousand people. So what else can you fight?

Answer: I read the meaning of the few people. They all say that the plot and some parts of ordinary books are too incredible, so I will answer them together. Please read the statement of ordinary people in terms of plot. As for the things that are not in line with history, I originally wanted to write a fantasy, so I don’t care so much about some aspects of ordinary people! I have also thought about the title you mentioned, and I have vaguely mentioned this issue in the article. Now ordinary people have a preliminary idea, and you will soon see it in the article. Thank you for your support!

□ And, even if the protagonist is determined to be an enlightened master, how could the environment he was in at that time allow it? Shi Miyuan was eyeing him, and doing so would probably give Shi Miyuan a lot of excuses to oppose him. In such a situation, doing such an extraordinary thing would arouse opposition from the entire feudal society, probably not the wise man.

□ Good book! But it seems a bit too hasty to let women join the army. In ancient times, women’s inability to join the army was not just a matter of whether women were capable. It was a matter of women’s status in society. The ethics and moral values ​​of the entire feudal society were a whole, and any change in any part would affect the existence of the entire moral system. This behavior would attract resistance and opposition from the entire society. foxkeith

□ A protective suit that is deeply integrated with the accommodation can also be taken off by the ancients. The author is really flirtatious in order to introduce the Demon Sect, but it makes people feel like they are flattering if they want to pinch it. It's too heartless! wingss

□ The person you wrote was a prince, not an ordinary citizen. On the way to the fiefdom, the officials along the way would definitely send people to escort him. This is basic common sense.

Answer: What you mean is that ordinary people cannot handle the plot well and have problems. I don’t know if it’s right for ordinary people to understand this way. So far, the plot is the biggest failure of ordinary people, which is caused by many reasons, but the biggest reason is that ordinary people started to think about writing novels simply. Speaking of this, I really admire those seniors. If you don’t say anything else, it’s a good idea to say that they are in the will. Ordinary people have been in pain for nearly a month before they decided to stick to it. As for your problems, ordinary people will consider them. In the future, try to consider some things carefully in their works.

□ A very simple fact, no matter how strong the flesh and blood body is, it cannot withstand even a bullet. The introduction of martial arts in historical fiction novels is definitely a failure. If the so-called martial arts are really so powerful, what should I study the firearms? I might as well print 1 million martial arts secrets, and everyone can practice them together. Even in a parallel universe, as long as the basic physics laws are consistent, physical phenomena will be no different from our world. The introduction of martial arts sects such as the Demon Sect has no meaning. Don’t tell me there is a Cihang Jingzhai or Yinhu behind it. If this happens, the book will fail to reach my grandma’s house. Zhang Sir

□ What's wrong with writing martial arts? This is called innovation. Let the big guy realize what Huang Yi didn't do!!! Xinghongzi

Answer: Zhang Sir: The questions you asked are very direct, but ordinary people cannot agree with them. Every writer will try to innovate in their own novels, and the same is true for ordinary people. Even if ordinary people fail in the end, they also give people a hint. In the fantasy world, as long as you dare to think, there is nothing that cannot be written. Do you think? Please continue to give more opinions to ordinary people in the future. Xing Hongzi's answer is also very acknowledged. You can't say that no one has done it before and that you can't do it. Do you think?

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□ There are many such novels from modern people to ancient times, but most authors have made a mistake in the article, that is, forcibly instilling modern terms and knowledge into ancient people. They thought that the article could make the article better, but on the contrary, it gives people a very strange feeling. As the saying goes, it is good to follow the local customs. You must know that it took thousands of years to gradually change from feudal thought to modern ideas. asstt239

Answer: Thank you for your suggestions on ordinary people. As long as you can improve the original ideas of ordinary people, make ordinary novels more reasonable and ordinary people will consider them. As for different history, it is not certain, otherwise ordinary people would not have written this novel. Please continue to support it!

□ Good. Good book. Especially in the character portrayal of the protagonist, you should be tolerant and be cruel. Only these people can succeed politically. And only these people can do big things.

□ Although I hate Song's cowardice and Qing's shamelessness, I still read this work!! I can only express my feelings at this moment with refreshing eyes?! Maybe I am ignorant, but please don't smash me with an egg?! Finally, I hope this book is the successor of the eunuch! Thank you!! waixingren

Answer: Finally, I can see the praise. Pingfan is very happy (are you very vain? Haha) I said thank you here! Please continue to support Pingfan. Pingfan also hates eunuchs. Please rest assured!

□ The article is wonderful, and I also like to read it very much, but there are a little flaw in the article. The 41st record of the "History of the Song Dynasty": Li Zong has established the Tao, prepared virtue, and revived the wise man, and the sage of martial arts, Emperor Anxiao, was named Yun, and the tenth-generation grandson of Taizu. His father Xi Lu, posthumously conferred the title of King Rong, and his family was in Shanyin County, Shaoxing Prefecture, and his mother Quan family. In August of the 17th year, Ning Zong disobeyed the dynasty and did not look at the dynasty. Renchen, he was decisive and said that he was appointed as the prince of Guicheng, and changed his name to Yun, and was appointed as the governor of Wutai Army, and was named Duke Cheng. It can be seen that Zhao Yun was not named Zhao Yun before becoming an emperor, and Zhao Yun was not Ningzong's son but his nephew. Of course, the so-called novelist's words do not have to be serious. I wish the author would write better and better and be further in the ranking list! Ha Xuan

Answer: Zhao Kuo had several sons who died before he became an adult, and this was why he asked his nephew to inherit the throne. I imagined it here. As for the real Zhao Yun in history, Guicheng, he would be the protagonist's opponent, and he would appear in the future plot. Thank you for your encouragement. Gongdan will work hard, but if you want to go to the next level, please support Gongdan more!

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