Don't talk about feelings, ignore ambiguity
I have been writing a book for just one month today, so let me tell you what I think.
I have carefully read every comment in the book review area, especially those who scold me and the protagonist. I think since everyone is unhappy with reading, it must be because I have something wrong with writing.
A few days after I posted the book, no one left a message. I wondered if no one reads it at all, so I was happy when I saw someone scolding me, because at least it proved that someone reads my book.
But seeing that all book friends leave messages and telling me, I gradually became a little suspicious of myself.
It is mainly reflected in the following issues:
1,2500 yuan, and superpowers.
How to say this? It's the thing that everyone criticized me the most, saying that the protagonist actually gave up superpowers for 2,500 yuan, saying that the protagonist was idiot, the author was idiot, very elementary school student. I really didn't expect there would be controversy here, and it was a point that most readers gave up this book. I explained it in the book review area before, one is because the protagonist wants to use money to confess, but because the protagonist does not need superpowers particularly now, and the third is because superpowers can only be used in tasks, and there are many restrictions on using them in the current world. Otherwise, how do you call others to live?
2. The second controversy point is involved, that is, the protagonist actually confesses to someone who only accepts others. And the most ridiculous thing is that the girl accepts the protagonist's confession. This is also called the spurt point of gathering fire.
What I want to say is that this is how I arranged it here. I thought that the rich second generation used money to mock the protagonist, and then asked the protagonist to make money with his mobile phone, and then compared him with money. I thought this was a pleasure, but I didn't expect that it would make everyone feel depressed. I was also deliberately asking the protagonist to owe a huge sum of money, so I was eager to do the task to pay back the money, so that there would be more stories to read.
As it turns out, the protagonist not only obtained a lot of superpowers, skills, etc., but also paid off the debt, and in reality there is still a lot of money to spend.
3. Emotional drama.
Maybe because of my lack of feelings, I really don’t know how to write a love drama. This is the reason why some book friends left. A book friend said he was sad and regretful when he voted for me every day. He said that he left after seeing Chapter 81. When I saw this comment, I didn’t write yesterday. I was reflecting on it. Since I posted the book, 9 of the ten comments in the book review area said that the plot arrangements of the above three points were unreasonable and they all said that they were decisively removed from the shelves. This only means that the above three points are indeed not good.
Of course, my book collection is growing very slowly because there is no recommendation now, which also shows that there is indeed something wrong with the book, so this is also the reason why I posted this single chapter today.
While I still have a few chapters to save, I will not write in the past two days. I will summarize my book and plan the future of my book. I will decide to start from two aspects:
1. Don’t talk about feelings, try to simplify them as much as possible. The protagonist will focus on pursuing strength in the future, and explore the endless world and the mysterious summoner alliance.
2. In the plot, the protagonist constantly shuttles through various time and space, performing various tasks, thus understanding the mystery of the Summoner League bit by bit and the core secrets of the endless world. This leads to wonderful stories.
I can't guarantee that my future chapters will satisfy all book friends, nor can I guarantee that they will be wonderful and flawless. I can only say that I will work harder and harder to present wonderful stories to everyone.
I hope that all book friends will give me an understanding and a hope. I am a newcomer, and it is inevitable to make mistakes in writing books. I will learn from the lessons and grow up step by step. Not everyone has the ability of genius writers such as Tang Jia San Shao and Tomato. At least I don’t have it. Only by constantly learning and progress can I write better and better stories.
Here, I hope that the book friends who support me can continue to support me, and believe that I will definitely write more exciting stories. I also hope that readers who have seen this book for the first time and who intend to give up this book can persist. I really can't stand my work. I also thank you for supporting me.
Here, I would like to thank the nine people on my fan list. You are my first support. I will remember you! Thank you for supporting me from the beginning!
In addition, thanks to my author friend Fei Feng Fei Yun, you guided me on the road of writing, and your books are also my favorite.
Thank you Cangda for giving me the opportunity to sign the contract. I will work hard to complete this book to repay you!
Chapter completed!