(ps: Thank you for the 10,000 rewards from my classmates. I have to give it a small bonus today.)

When Lin Kaizhong stared at Tan Yaowei and others in amazement, Tang Zhun in Wanhejiacheng East Garden also stretched happily, and clenched his fists and made a string of crisp finger joints, "Do it? It's so fast, the whole article is written in this way for more than 90,000 words."

More than 90,000 words are definitely the beginning of a book that is often millions or exaggerated to tens of millions of words, mini ones cannot be mini, but for the [Jiangxia Past] adapted from Lin Kaizhong's deeds, it is finished.

That's right, it's normal to write a plot in an online novel.

Especially the story doesn't have that much water, and the content is very concise.

After being happy, Tang Zhun went out for breakfast and came back to continue to examine it. Not only did he check the typos, but he also included various modifications. Whether it was used for words or sentences, or some places that were not suitable, he made modifications.

He changed more than ten times after he was busy until noon.

Then Tang Zhun contacted Zhao Zhiyuan online and wanted to ask this old author in traditional literature to help him check it out and see how hard he worked for the two nights and one morning.

Zhao Zhiyuan met at the birthday party next door at the last time. The other party failed to write online articles, but he has been in the traditional world for ten years and is still a member of the provincial writers' association who graduated from the Department of Literature. He also treated Tang Zhun well at the party. He checked and evaluated it? It's not difficult.

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"Tang Zhun? I've finished reading this 90,000-word novella, is your test of entering the traditional world? Last time I heard Lao Chen say that you bought so many material books and wanted to try tradition. I thought you were joking, but I didn't expect you to make it out in just about half a month."

A few hours later, Zhao Zhiyuan's Penguin lit up, and when he came back, Tang Zhun was speechless.

"Brother Zhao, I want to ask you to check it out, don't be so polite, right? This is not the first time we know each other. How is this book written? I will approve it if I want it, otherwise I won't look for you."

He replied to Zhao Zhiyuan speechlessly, and then paused for a few minutes before typing again.

"Okay, then I'm not polite."

"How do you say this book? I am convinced. The content is a bit exaggerated. The male protagonist arranged it too miserably, but you have a strong writing skills and a strong style. In such a cruel and depressing reality, the male protagonist has always been so optimistic and cheerful. When I see such a miserable event, I frown and suppressed, and I feel panicked, but the male protagonist's optimistic sunshine really touched me."

"There is that kind of father-son warmth? Especially this passage is so awesome. I cried when Lin Kaizhong celebrated his son's sixth birthday."

...

There are many artistic adaptations in the past of Jiangxia.

Lin Kaizhong was 29 years old and had four years old. When he was about to recover, he was already in his early 31 years old. His family was covered in foreign debts and was under too much pressure. When his legs were still not smooth, he relied on getting up early and running to the county town to set up a stall to support his family. The money he earned was to pay off the debt first. On the day his son was about to celebrate his birthday, he gritted his teeth and embezzled some. He bought a big meal and returned to the countryside in advance to celebrate his six-year-old son's birthday.

As a result, his son didn't have a big meal and told his father in panic that he had finished third in the class in the exam? Lin Kaizhong was furious and scolded him hard because it was Xia Tian's house and there was no refrigerator or anything else. After the training, he asked his son to have a big meal. However, the little guy ran out crying and said he would go to find his grandfather and ignore him.

Lin Kaizhong walked hard and couldn't catch up. He limped slowly with the big meal. As soon as he arrived outside his parents' small yard, he heard cheerful laughter inside.

That was Lin Kaizhong's father questioning the little guy that he had clearly finished third in the class, so why did he lie to Lin Kaizhong and say that he was third from the bottom?

The little guy said with pride that he could keep his father at home for a big meal alone. He has lost a lot of weight recently, and then Lin Kaizhong was crying silently outside the yard while carrying the big meal.

This plot is not a real deed. When Tang Zhun asked, the other party didn't talk much about his family. He only said that when he was young, his parents also spent all their money to support him. The child was just very sensible.

The plot fabricated by Tang Zhun himself, coupled with enough writing skills, was vivid and warm. Now I heard Zhao Zhiyuan praise him, saying that he was a big man and cried?

Tang Zhun was a little embarrassed and embarrassed.

"Don't tease me Brother Zhao, hurry up and give me some real opinions."

When Zhao Zhiyuan typed this line, he replied again, "I didn't tease you. The plot of the sixth birthday highlights the warmth of father and son. It is normal for me to cry as a father. If my child is half as sensible as Xiaohang in Jiangxia's past, I will be willing to go to the downtown area."

"Ha, let's not talk about this, your whole book is very good. Although there is room for improvement in writing skills and is not first-class, it is enough to attract people. Then the whole story is too ignited. After the initial depression, Lin Kaizhong was optimistic and positive in a small desperate situation, and he was able to achieve success again and again with these. I was so happy to see it. The warm tears can touch me. Overall, in addition to the writing skills, the storyline can also be improved and written better, and the storylines are all masterpieces. The depth is not bad. If we can be as optimistic as the male protagonist, what should we be afraid of when we are alive?"

"His words really touched me deeply. It's very deep. I'm at least free and still alive. What do you need to worry about with these two points? It's so right."

In the book, Lin Kaizhong graduated from junior high school and did a tiled job. He first built a house in the countryside and then went to the city to the decoration team, construction site, etc. After almost paralyzed from the work-related injury, he was abandoned by the boss and did not pay medical expenses. When he got better, he took advantage of his previous connections to build a team. Taking advantage of the trend of Jiangxia's development, he took advantage of all kinds of hard work to get the job of the first nine-story tube building in the urban village. He started to start. With his reputation, quick construction, righteous people, etc., he was responsible for building tube building in urban villages and building companies one by one.

Later, he started to contract the construction of the community, and then he was cheated by Tam Yaowei and threw it to him a tofu and empty company... He supported his liver disease and visited the home buyers who paid the deposit advance payment overnight. He sent copies of his ID card, family address, etc. to stabilize people's hearts, borrowed debts and borrowed money to demolish and rebuilt. The reputation of the new community construction company exploded again, reaching a new peak of his career, and married the beauty who had always supported him. It was his son who took the initiative to help the beauty who had secretly loved him pursued him.

Overall, this is all about Jiangxia’s past.

In the depression of the environment, such as the warm scene of celebrating his son's sixth birthday, or encountering minor setbacks in struggle, Lin Kaizhong relies on his own ability and optimistic infection to overcome difficulties together, and there are more than a dozen things.

However, what Zhao Zhiyuan said touched him was really what Lin Kaizhong himself said.

"I'll tell the truth. Your pen power can capture me as an author. Once you invest in it, you can easily be infected and moved. I've read it and cried four or five times, and sometimes I laughed loudly, which made my wife think I was crazy."
Chapter completed!