Chapter PS, there is no one to open a separate chapter for PS
I want to say a little too much, because I have been holding it in for a long time and didn't want to spoil it before, so I have been delayed until now.
First of all, I would like to say sorry to friends who can persist in seeing this. The quality of the recent update is not good. I know that this is why I started this chapter. I would like to give an explanation.
The content of the recent period is not interesting, and there are some logical bugs. There are reasons for this, because the plot I wanted to write at the beginning was not like this. I changed the manuscripts myself to make a desperate attempt, but overestimated my ability. I encountered a big official recommendation and forced double updates, which resulted in me not having time to optimize and modify subsequent manuscripts.
In fact, many of the updates during this period were made by me using some of the scrap manuscripts to piece together, so they look a little out of touch and some small bugs have appeared, but I really don’t have much time to improve them.
It is precisely because of this that I didn’t have the nerve to ask for recommendations or something during this period, and I rarely responded to comments. The main reason is that I didn’t have time, and I was revising and saving manuscripts. Even at the beginning of the month, the editor asked me to put it on the shelves, and I turned it off. Because I don’t think the recent update is worth spending money, so my friends who can persist in seeing the present and vote for me can also be considered true love...
Thank you very much for supporting me like this.
Going back to the previous topic, there are many reasons why I need to rewrite the manuscript. It is caused by the collection of various problems. It is also because I am not firm enough or thinking too much. In short, it is all about myself who is trying to die and cannot blame others.
According to my original idea, I plan to use the three years that were blank in the original plot to write down the changes in the city's mentality so that he can truly integrate into this world.
After leaving Orochimaru, the castle was suppressed in the Snake Cave and the inner swelling after defeating several major characters in succession, coupled with the unique arrogance of the time traveler, which made him more indifferent to some irrelevant characters and became more cold-blooded. I have always been foreshadows about this mentality change in the early stage. Careful friends may have noticed it, but I didn't realize that most of the reason should be the reason for my lack of writing skills.
Then, Xuye Palace Zhaoxin encountered setbacks, which caused the mentality of the city to explode and began to kill. In fact, there was no anti-venom clone at the beginning. Going to Tu Hidden Village to make trouble was originally a scene of the original body, and it was even more excessive in the original case. Han, Onoki, and Naruto were all cut to death by him, and countless ninjas in Tu Hidden Village were killed and injured.
The three Taki Ninji Dragon Suits were not treated as good as they are now, but were directly controlled by the city using illusion. Then they went to Taki Hidden Village to force the Hero Water, and then they would be killed by the city as abandoned sons. The underground exchange was also retaliated by the city and demolished several strongholds.
Another thing is that Shiraki was injured when he obtained the Thunder Sword, and he directly attacked Mitsui in the city. At this point, he completely had a quarrel with the five major ninja villages in the city, and even brought a Taki Hidden Village.
Then there was a big battle between the Mitsuya Palace and the five major ninja villages, and then it developed until Shiraki finally couldn't stand it. He began to dissuade the already madman with Zaibuzen. But Shiraki felt that Shiraki had betrayed him, and instead fought against Shiraki. In desperation, Shiraki sought help from Orochimaru, and Obito encouraged Akatsuki to come in and get involved. This plot only wrote an outline. I haven't had a definite plan for how to develop it, and then I have already started to rewrite the manuscript.
The final outcome is of course that Cheng Zhinei regained his reason under the inspiration of Bai, and began to truly integrate into this world. I wrote a rough draft at the end, but unfortunately I can't use it at all now._(′?`"∠)_
Also, because of the battle with Shiraku, Orochimaru and others, the rewards in the castle were almost all recovered, but when he was crazy, he received several negative rewards. After the castle returned to normal, his favorability for dialogue increased by 80 and his favorability for Zaibuzhan increased by 40, so he basically added them back.
The above is the aborted case of the plot before entering the Shifeng Chuan. In addition to describing the change in the protagonist's mentality, I still think that I can change the character drawn by the protagonist, so that the protagonist will not make the protagonist whose combat power has exceeded the standard become more exaggerated.
But you also know that because the system's setting that can recycle rewards has been questioned by many people, this has led to my concern that it would be unpleasant to actually write the plot of recycling rewards.
Of course this is just one of the reasons. Even if this is not the case, I will still make a change. Before I published the work about the system, I actually started to do it.
Because this plot is a bit off the relaxed direction I wanted at the beginning, it seems a bit heavy. And when I dig deep into the inner changes of the protagonist, I feel that few people may like to read it. After all, online novels are mainly relaxed.
In addition, I personally don’t like the protagonist who kills people with a disagreement, but I don’t want the protagonist to be too frustrated, so I gave him a powerful slap and set him down as a person with a bottom line. So when I suddenly became decisive in the future, I felt like I was a archway...
Well, it’s because I am not capable enough to write this change of mindset reasonably.
Another reason is... In the end, the protagonist was pulled back by white. I wanted to write the feeling of the kingly passionate friendship. However, for some reason, I deleted and modified the manuscript several times. The plot I wrote was either too bloody or felt like gaygay...
Coupled with some mixed thoughts, I changed the entire saved manuscript with one stroke. I thought I had enough time to improve the new plot, but I didn't expect to overestimate myself... Alas...
In recent times, the new plot has been revised and revised. I accidentally deleted two chapters in a hurry, which made me vomit blood, so the quality of the updates may still be a little problem. I can only try my best to keep updating. TJ is impossible for TJ. Whether it is unwilling to give up, there is a beginning and an end, I still hope to finish the book. Even though few people read it before, I insisted on writing it down. It would be a pity to give up now.
So I will continue to write the book, and it doesn't matter whether it can be put on the shelves. I can only hope that everyone will like the subsequent content. I am a little sorry for the big guys who helped me push the book at the beginning, and those who gave me red envelopes. I don't know if they are still reading it...
If you really don’t like it, you can’t force it. You can only see you again if you are destined to be the next book. I hope you can like the new book at that time.
Of course, it is a bit far from talking about a new book now. But during the period of revision, I did have the intention to cut off the new book directly, and even thought about two subjects, one Marvel and the other HP.
As for when I can start writing...hahahaha... depends on the situation...∠(?”∠)_
The 5W word manuscript is like this, and the next book must be opened at least 10W...
In addition, I originally planned to add some TV and theater content appropriately, but now I don’t have time to add animations, so I can only give up.
That's almost the same, it's a bit long-winded and a little confused, but thank you for taking the time to see me explain/complaint/complain/spoil.
Anyway...
Chapter completed!