Han Lie did not rush to add her as a friend, but opened the book "Misty Rain and Frost", which was full of mysteries from the name to the introduction to the story, and read it carefully.

At 11 o'clock, he finally read all 120,000 words, and Han Lie felt confident.

Open your own account, enter the number, search, and see the interface again.

who I am?

Proud little cucumber.

Who are you?

Swap ham for cucumber.

What do you want from me?

Exchange...ah bah bah!

Delete it and solemnly change it to two other words: communication.

After sending the application, Han Lie turned up the volume to the maximum and went to take a shower and brush his teeth.

The lights in the Humanities Apartment Building are turned off at 11:30 p.m., with the exception of sleeping rooms.

But now everyone has a smartphone, and even if the power is cut off, there is no need to delay chatting on QQ - at the end of the 3G era, apart from chatting on QQ and reading novels, there is really no other entertainment.

Therefore, Han Lie estimated that Xi Luting was still very likely to log into the trumpet today.

At almost 11:30, Han Lie was about to go to bed when a coughing sound suddenly came from the laptop speaker.

Yoxi, I applied as a friend!

Brother Lie jumped up, jumped out of bed, and sat in front of the table.

[A piece of loneliness has passed your friend request]

A hint of loneliness: "Hello. Thank you for your support."

Very reserved and quiet opening remarks.

This is not possible...

Han Lie decisively sent out a sand sculpture, which aroused enthusiasm.

(Kowtow to the boss)

Ham for cucumber: "Why are you a eunuch! (Crying) (Crying)"

Ham for cucumber: "I really like your writing..."

Ham for Cucumber: "Do you have any plans to write a new book?"

…

In dormitory 2333, Xi Luting was lying on the bed, leaning sideways, legs curled up, and looking at the QQ interface of his phone anxiously.

Her book makes too many beginner mistakes.

How self-righteous I was before I started writing, and how disappointed and embarrassed I was after the results came out.

100 collections in one and a half months, three bomb rewards, more than 20 comments on Tiger Balm...

There may only be a few people who really like this book.

And there is no one who is willing to communicate with her as the author.

Therefore, it was her first time to add a reader’s QQ account and chat with the reader.

She was looking forward to it too much.

But the problem is that the reader opposite is the only "tycoon" who gives a large reward. She attaches great importance to it, but she doesn't know what kind of attitude she should use to deal with it.

Therefore, worrying about gains and losses is very serious.

However, when the other person sent three warm greetings without stopping, her heart was shocked, trembling, and numb, as if she was being penetrated by electricity.

Look! That’s my fan!

Finally, someone recognized my artistic expression in the vast sea of ​​books!

I am not a poor little person that no one understands!

Xi Luting was extremely excited. A sense of relief and surprise that Boya finally met his son came to her heart, making her let go of her aloofness and defensiveness in an instant.

A bit of loneliness: "Hahaha! Thank you for your like!"

A twinge of loneliness: "It's not that I want to be a eunuch, it's that the data is too bad, which really hurts my mentality. I really can't write anymore. (Woo woo)"

A hint of loneliness: "I even suspect that I may not be suitable for writing novels. Apart from the words, I am really a mess."

A tiny bit of loneliness: "(crying) (crying) (crying)"

…

When chatting with girls, the most important thing is that you have to know what they want to hear.

Many licking dogs think that they are done by bragging without thinking, but they are totally wrong!

Every beautiful woman has heard countless compliments from childhood to adulthood. It is normal for her to be bored, annoyed and indifferent.

This involves another "qualification" issue.

It means, do you have enough weight to praise others directly?

For example, Zhang Yimou said casually: "Girl, you are so beautiful and have a good temperament."

Ouch, what an honor!

But a boy who was just a passer-by praised him as soon as he came up to her: "Beauty, you are so beautiful!"

That's called frivolity.

Han Lie's reward of 100 yuan initially solved the qualification problem, and she could be praised for her good writing without causing resentment.

However, the following chat cannot continue to follow the old path of mindless praise.

The portion is still not enough, and exaggerating too much seems false.

And we can’t even get to the root of the conversation.

So Han Lie carefully analyzed Xi Luting's mentality, roughly determined what she wanted to hear most, and then carefully started to talk.

Ham for cucumber: "Huh? Your current condition is very good!"

Ham for cucumber: "To be honest, the plot setting of "Misty Rain and Frost" is indeed quite problematic."

Swapping ham for cucumber: “And the technique is too immature.”

Ham for cucumber: "However, now that you have calmed down and can face your shortcomings, you will definitely make rapid progress in the future!"

Ham for Cucumber: "As an online article author, except for a few top-notch talent monsters, the rest of the great and minor masters have been trained little by little. Your later style will be very good!"

Seeing those two criticisms, Xi Luting felt a little uncomfortable.

But when I saw the two words of encouragement at the end, I felt very warm again.

So, I easily accepted the other party’s qualification for commenting.

Um!

My Tie Tie is right, if you want to succeed, you must face your own weaknesses!

With an unprecedented humility, she asked the only reader for advice: "Can you tell me specifically about my problem? Also, how can I correct it?"

This question is too big, and it sounds like seeking medical treatment indiscriminately.

Han Lie smiled when he saw it.

If any fan can analyze this kind of problem to the point, then why do we need professionals?

However, you are lucky, I am really an expert...

More than ten years of super high reading + level 3 literary knowledge + level 3 writing skills = a little god who can write and teach.

Used to give guidance to a complete novice, it might even be a bit overkill.

In order to enhance his authority in Xi Luting's heart, Han Lie was full of fire as soon as he came up.

Swapping ham for cucumbers: “Say it in advance, the following are all personal feelings.

I think your biggest problem may not be clichés such as plot, characters, rhythm, etc., but that your common sense and social experience are not able to support such a story.

To put it simply, it is a typical accumulation that cannot keep up with ambition.

The story you want to tell is too big, magnificent, magnificent and dreamy, it is the perfection in your imagination.

But if you can't fill in the appropriate details, it will look very vain.

I often feel "struggled" when reading a book.

Your writing is more than adequate, and in some places it can even be called spiritual.

But putting aside the details and looking at the overall situation, the phenomenon of a small horse pulling a large cart is very prominent, and it is obviously difficult to control it.

Then there will be dispersion and chaos.
To be continued...