Chapter 400 Digression [Make up yesterday]

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Lin Yuan nodded and made a serious comment, "The script is very good, but it is a bit single, and the storyline can be richer. Since it is a script, some contradictions can be set to make the whole story more intense, and the characters have to be more fuller."

An An nodded, "I get it."

Lin Yuan smiled gently, "Then you go and change it."

An An revised the manuscript for three days overnight. When An An showed the revised script again to Lin Yuan, Lin Yuan saw it from the beginning.

After reading it, her eyes were red.

Because, the little protagonist in the script is really pitiful and touching.

Her miserable life experience, her strength, her sensibility, and every thing about her biological mother touches people's hearts. At the end of the story, although the little protagonist fulfilled her wish, it still makes people feel unfulfilled and very regretful. She always feels that she should not end like this.

"How is it? Sister-in-law? Is it OK?" An An asked nervously.

Lin Yuan slowly raised her red eyes, "Yes, it's very touching. An An, you are a very excellent person. The script is also very well written, almost perfect. It shows that you have great talent in writing, and you can create more after that."

An An was shy, "Thank you sister-in-law."

Lin Yuan gently touched her head, "Silly child. But An An, the ending of this script is a little regretful. The ending is too fast, and the whole story is very good, but the story of this little protagonist should not only be her sixteen or seventeen years old, but her whole life."

An An nodded, "Then...I'll write again?"

Lin Yuan shook her head, looked at her and spoke in a negotiation tone, "I will write the part of this later, or I will find someone to complete it for you. Do you think it's done? My sister-in-law means that she wants to add something when the little protagonist grows up. For example, she starts her own business and meets the right person after starting a business. She falls in love with the right person, gets married, has a baby, etc. Because of your age, you must have never experienced these, so you can't write it even if you force it to write, so I need someone else to start writing."

An An actually wanted to write about what she grew up, but she really had no experience.

"Okay, I'll bother my sister-in-law in the second half of the script."

Lin Yuan was relieved, "If you are really sensible, then my sister-in-law will do it for you. The first half of your script is really great, come on!"

He clenched his fists and his face full of encouragement.

An An also clenched his fists, "Come on!"

Lin Yuan didn't want to waste a good script, nor did she want her experience to be completely attached to An An's script, so as not to break the script.

Therefore, Lin Yuan decided to give the second half of the script to try it out.

If you try something more appropriate, it will be written by someone else.

Because the price was not low, there were many people willing to try the draft. Lin Yuan gave three days. Three days later, she decided after reading the trial draft.

This trial tests the storyline in the second half, as well as the plot and lines that write one or two episodes.

Lin Yuan was also full of expectations for the trial draft.

Taking advantage of the three days of trial draft, Lin Yuan was also happy to be idle and asked Shen Shuting to drive the car and take her family to travel around the mountains and rivers.

This winter is also suitable for barbecue. At Lin Yuan’s suggestion, the family even went to barbecue.

Three days passed very quickly, and in the blink of an eye, three days passed.

Except for a small number of people who gave the trial draft, they could not submit the trial draft, and basically handed over the trial draft, whether it was good or bad.

Lin Yuan first ruled out the trial drafts that she thought were inappropriate, and the remaining three trial drafts were left.

In the three trial drafts, she thought they were all very good, but it was difficult to make a decision for a while.

"Chen Shuting, come and help me see which of these three trial drafts is more suitable?"

Lin Yuan sat on the bed, covering the bed with three thousand black hairs. Just a thin silhouette made people feel pity.

Chen Shuting swallowed, sat down beside the bed, and took her into his warm arms with one hand.

"Okay, I'll see."

He pulled the quilt and wrapped her tightly, and took her with one hand and picked up a trial draft.

Lin Yuan was depressed, "Look at it, what are you doing with your arms around me? I can't breathe."

Chen Shuting said, "The wind is strong, I'm afraid you will catch a cold."

“…”

Lin Yuan followed him and leaned on his shoulder and followed him to read the trial, "What do you think of this trial?"

Chen Shuting commented, "This trial draft looks good, but the hero has a bad personality. He doesn't trust his wife enough. Moreover, why do you have to start a business with his wife on his back? Not good!"

Immediately, I threw away the trial draft.

After picking up another trial draft, Chen Shuting took a few glances and said happily, "This one, this one is good."

Lin Yuan glanced at it, but frowned, "This trial draft? It's good, the love between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet, but... will it be too sweet? And how can there be such a good love in the world? I always feel that there are fewer twists and turns, but it makes people feel a little fucked, and I don't think it's good enough."

Chen Shuting retorted, "Why is sweet love not possible? This heroine has been suffering since she was a child. When she grew up, she met a husband who liked her. What's wrong with loving her?"

Lin Yuan also refuted, "But reality is reality. Reality cannot be because of your hard work when you were a child. When you grow up, God will give you a tall, rich and handsome man, and then spoil you and love you. Moreover, the plot is arranged like this, which will drag down the entire script and hide the light of the heroine. Her growth experience when she was a child is just to meet a tall, rich and handsome man when she grows up?"

"What do you want?" Chen Shuting hesitated and asked her.

Lin Yuan picked up the last one, "I think this trial is appropriate, but the author's writing style needs to be improved and his line skills are lacking. But at present, her conception is the most suitable. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have met since childhood, but they did not communicate too much. Even because of some things when they were young, the male protagonist is biased against the female owner.

When they first met when they grew up, the male protagonist still had no subconscious trust in the heroine. As time goes by, he slowly changed his view of her, and then carved his trust into his bones and blood. Finally, he fell in love with her and trusted each other naturally. I think such a love body is very romantic. There is no passionate love process, but it can be touching."

Chen Shuting nodded, "Well, since you have decided, then use this story."

Staring at her eyes, Chen Shuting's deep eyes almost looked into her heart, suddenly picked up her face, gently approached her ear and whispered.

"Yuanyuan, to be honest, if you can choose, what I want to give you more is the life in the second script, holding you in your palm, warming you and pampering you."

Lin Yuan's nose felt sore, "...Chen Shuting, in fact, you have done it."

Now, he really holds her in his palm, and he really warms her and loves her.

Chen Shuting shook his head, "No, I still can't forgive myself. In the future life, I have been trying to make you a lot. It's all my fault that I was too proud at that time. Since I like it, why do I have to mess around? I regret not carrying you up and running..."

Lin Yuan's ears became hot and she pushed him angrily, "It's off topic."

Chen Shuting smiled and pinched her hand.

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