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I was optimistic about this book a long time ago. At that time, there was no list that could rank 29 in the new book, and there was no adulteration at all. The results were indeed very excellent.

The characters have very clear personalities, and it is very difficult to make mistakes when people tell their personalities. The only bad thing about character description is that good or bad is too absolute.

But absolution is also another kind of space, and strong contrast can highlight the ornamentality. I believe many friends will like this, so I won’t discuss it.

Maybe a close study of the plot of this book will reveal a flaw, that is, the time for idealization and advancement is too fast. But you might as well think from another perspective, what is a good novel? What can make you follow, let you wait, and let you reminisce about is a good novel. This novel can at least be regarded as one of the few top-notch products recently. If you study it carefully, you will find that this is the essential element of sensationalism and fantasy. I wonder if you have the same idea as Huang?

If there is anything that really affects the fun of reading in this book, I can tell you directly, no! Because of the unclear main line, everyone has lost the idea of ​​following up. The Pencil Brothers and I have discussed it and made up for this only imperfection. From the perspective of reading, unless you are deliberately picking on it, you will be able to seek classics, fun, and passion. This book is absolutely fine!

Some people say that details are ignored, and the characters' emotions are not described enough. I have to say that this statement is wrong. It is not that there are many words but rich details. The pencil book should be deleted and the characters' plot environment is all chosen. How can the details be ignored? As for the feelings are not described enough, I have to refute it. Let's take out two paragraphs to analyze.

The first paragraph is a description of the relationship between the goblins and unicorns. There are few words? But don’t you feel that you read their hearts? This is what ordinary people mean. A little subtle description of action is actually better than a description of the inner heart of thousands of words and hundreds of lines.

The second paragraph is the rebellion of the elf. The inner contradictions portrayal and the grasp of suspense are exciting. Can you say that such a description is not enough? Who can call the pencil to add hundreds or thousands of words to describe the situation at that time? I'm afraid it can't.

I also appreciate the selection of pencil materials. It is difficult to control scenes in other worlds. Basically, it will be obstacles when I see it about 100,000 words. After observing for a few days, the pencil was easily carried over. This has to explain the personal realm of the pencil brothers. I absolutely support ancient martial arts literature. I once lowered the text of a 250,000 word gangster's confusion, but I couldn't master the plot well. That book can be said to be the only failure in my life, and I never dared to write it again. So when I saw the book of pencil, I was very excited. Of course, I won't talk about my personal feelings. I just wanted to explain the importance of selecting materials. I believe many friends read it because of this?

To sum up what I mean, this book is logical, reading, ornamental and aftertaste. Even if it cannot be described as the best, it is definitely worth reading.

The world is filled with blood, and it is hard to find it. It is fueled by the fighting spirit. Who can stop the Chinese men?

I have a sword. If a person has a sword, I have a pen. The sword pointed at the long pavilion is sharp. The painting is full of meaning. Why not seek to be true to yourself?

Haha, I wrote 8 short sentences for you. Maybe it’s not neat, but it’s something I did in one go in 2 minutes. It’s definitely the most real idea in my heart, and I have never imposed any modifications. My writing style is very different from yours. Many people should know me, and I’m the best at scolding books, but I praise your books! I like it!

The things I wrote are never imposing enough. In order to create a atmosphere of Chinese martial arts, I will give you two more famous sentences.

The road to the pass is as iron as iron, and now we take a step back to our heads!
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