Dear gentlemen, ladies, ladies who have become gentlemen, gentlemen who have become ladies, ladies who have become both ladies and gentlemen, ladies who have both ladies and ladies, ladies who have both ladies and ladies, people who have not been gentlemen and ladies.

The following content may be a bit long-term, and let me tell you why there are such long-term bad words like eunuch's declaration.

Let me analyze my experience in writing books within these thousand words.

I don’t have the talent and only have eyes, and I feel that the plot I have written recently is insufficient.

All the progress in the world of Ishe is too fast.

I overestimated myself and thought I could make daily updates under the beatings of life and writing. When I forced to write, the plot was not thoughtful enough, and many times I filled in a lot of settings written on the outline.

In fact, this problem has existed long ago.

My first volume of martial arts world and the second volume of Yishe world have serious problems with insufficient development. The worldview has been unfolded, but before the characters have begun to deepen, they are being instantly lost by the protagonist.

In addition, the preaching plot that was said to be forcibly in the early stages did not penetrate the martial arts world, and the entire first volume was full of abrupt ending.

The protagonist's character is not well established, and it needs to be adjusted slightly to give the arrogant heavenly soldiers a good reason and a good sense of substitution.

Speaking of this, many people criticized the protagonist for being too forced to save everything. I think this may be my personal reason.

When I was writing this book, I used my grandfather's time to write while accompanying me. Some readers who are chasing me can find that some leave notes were issued in the hospital, and even on the day of my death, I sent a single chapter due to mood swings.

Because I have experienced the deaths and illnesses of relatives and friends recently in my career, my resistance to birth, old age, sickness and death has reached the extreme.

When my seriously ill grandfather died, even though he had already known that it was a destined thing, he would still think that there would be a miracle, a god, a saint, a party, and something that could save him with incredible means.

It is common sense that people die in the end, but maybe I am not mature enough that all these things are reflected in the book.

I may be angry in the face of death.

Seeing the flames lit up, people turned into ashes, leaving only a small jar, I thought that people should not be the only one.

How can the excitement of life be limited here? Then let us live forever.

No, you will come back alive even if you die!

So the article keeps blowing the immortal way, beating the battle to overcome death, but obviously I am too pig and dog, and I am a bad blow.

In the story of Platinum, I originally wanted to describe a heroic story that could save everyone. Originally, there was normal awareness of the crisis - the crisis occurred - at the critical moment, the hero came forward to stop it, and there were normal ups and downs.

But after being influenced by life, I unknowingly wanted to solve the problem before it happened, which led to the story not unfolding, and before readers were involved in the incident, they solved it with a "bang!"

Perhaps it is because Yu Wei is too versatile as the protagonist and has destroyed the story structure, or perhaps it is because I really have the idea of ​​becoming a father, and I hope that such a super soldier can overcome all difficulties when encountering a big crisis.

But books cannot be written like this, as it is just that heavenly soldiers can't help but blow up all world crises.

This is indeed the main theme of the thought, but the process must be unfolded so that readers can feel the same way.

The pictures that keep flashing through my head will make me excited and make me write happily should not be this level.

No, it should be said that it cannot be this level.

To immerse people in a state of immersion, we must never stop at this stage.

Of course, this is also my lack of skill and experience, otherwise I would have modified it long ago.

Now that things have come to this point, I can no longer comfort myself. If I ask for better things, I can only make changes. The story I want to describe should not be just like this.

With my close friends, good teachers, and the benchmark in life, my teacher gave me some advice, which made me feel deeply unable to be satisfied with this stage.

I looked at my recent subscription and the decrease was obvious, which was the feedback from readers to me. Of course, the instability and decline of the update were also a problem.

Next, I will take some time to modify and pick typos in the whole book, and by the way, sort out the next plot and development.

The grades of the Dog Slaughter next door are willing to modify the article in order to pursue a better self. I am just a novice and there is nothing to lose. Why not improve your article!

I am deeply sorry for those more than 200 friends who follow the updates at the first time every day, and I can only work hard to improve the quality of the article quickly.

Don’t worry about being cheated, because after I posted this chapter, I was already burning with my anger and was eager to make progress in revisions!

If you send this chapter out, you must have just stopped subscribing. Everything will get back on you, but this is just the first book, not the last book in life.

But I don’t want this book to be still half-dead after a year, and at least let me be silent for a month or two, and let it reach a new level.

Anyway, I don’t make a living by relying on this book. I have to be responsible for my own story after writing this book.

Just go out and improve yourself and return soon.
Chapter completed!