To be honest, this is the first time I have finished this review (I have written two unfinished reviews before, ahem).

Let’s talk about this ending, it can actually be seen as two, one is the ending of the main world and the other is the ending of the Middle Earth.

The latter is an open-ended one, and I personally feel quite satisfied.

The former seems a little hurry, only explaining the overall background and filling in the main pits, and not writing in detail.

Especially in the description of power, it seems very vague and there is no clear contrast. It seems that it is not too strong if it is said to be strong, and it is not as weak as it is said to be weak.

This is an old problem and is also one of the most obvious flaws in this book.

We all know that the most common problem that novices make is that they have a high self-esteem. Although I am not pure and new, I am not old.

So when I set up the power system of this book, I suddenly had an idea, that is, why do I need to set this power system?

In the real magic world, will there be such level-by-level improvement?

Later I studied it and felt that it might be difficult to write this kind of article without doing it, so I set one, but it was not perfect at all.

This is one of the main reasons for the mid-term collapse.

Secondly, it is naturally mixed with various forces in other worlds, so that everything under the protagonist's control becomes increasingly chaotic.

It is not easy to write if you are invincible, because most bosses are described as powerfully, if you teleport them up and stab them, you will die. I can't write the kind of slap plot that you have to slap in the face before a fight. Usually, they just go over without saying anything. It looks quite pleasant, but it's boring.

The chaos of various settings, the drag of various plots, and the pale and powerless description of various characters... This book has not been able to rise for no reason.

Later, it was better to write about the Elf Diamond because the world is very simple and it feels no longer messy (yes, I felt very messy before).

After all, painting on a canvas full of messy lines is different from lifting a pen on a blank pure canvas.

Then I wrote it all the way and realized it a little.

I won’t mention the writing ideas of the Elf Diamond Coil and other things, as I have said before.

There is nothing to say about the main world, and it still feels messy when I pick it up again, so I finished it in a hurry, a little unsatisfied, but it was also over here.

It seems that it is ten months since I opened the book, and it is almost 1.7 million words. I actually want to talk about the various gains, experiences, ideas, etc. I have done this, but now my brain is empty.

With the three words that were typing out in this book, the plot concepts, bug arguments, the stubbornness of being pointed out, and everything that I was very concerned about at the time and now I can't remember anything is basically a passing cloud.

I am not capable enough, but I am moving forward steadily and choosing the path of writing. Although I am not sure that I will continue unswervingly, the delayed and slow down should be almost the same.

So look forward and don’t look back on the past.

Regarding the new book, one initial idea is to still write about this subject, the Song of Ice and Fire, the Lord of the Rings, and some other Western fantasies of the same type (not yet thought about it), and write it at a slow pace to eliminate the main world.

The main reason for this choice is that it is a bit regretful. The power has increased too quickly. When writing about ice and fire, I didn’t write in depth. I kept floating on it and didn’t get into the real charm of Westeros.

The Lord of the Ring is naturally because its time span is very long, and there are other stages that I am very interested in.

However, the reason why ideas are thoughts is because they have not evolved into reality. So before I actually started the book, I dare not say what to write specifically. After all, young people always think too much, and maybe a good idea on the way to conceive will be diverted.

There is an estimate of the time, it will take July, about one month or two months. Because I am a chubby, I must leave myself enough rest and time to plan and prepare.

There seems to be nothing else to say about the others...

I am very grateful to the book friends who have been accompanying me in writing, and I am also very happy to see those friends who abandoned books but were attracted back from the middle, but it is time to say goodbye.

Once this place is farewell, I will travel thousands of miles to the lonely hut.
Chapter completed!