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2021.8.22 Phased Summary (available on Friday)

1. Let’s talk about the recent death of the Rope Tree and the Scorpion Mother.

Theme: In this plot, my purpose is to express my thoughts on the theme of war through the deaths of important figures on both sides during the war—

Both sides want to benefit more and cut a piece of meat from each other, but ultimately they will cause a situation where both sides suffer losses.

When the Rose Tree dies, it is obvious to the naked eye that Tsunade will hate the Satsuki Ninja, and Orochimaru will hate the Satsuki Ninja.

Similarly, if the scorpion father and mother die, Chiyo will hate Konoha, and Hai Laozang will hate Konoha.

The hatred between the two sides will continue to be passed on, to the Scorpion of Red Sand, Uchiha Mikoto, and even further generations.

But who is wrong on both sides?

The Scorpion father, Scorpion mother and Rope Tree both want to fight for the village and kill the enemy. They are not wrong.

Tsunade, Orochimaru, Uzumaki Kiyo, Chiyo, and Hae-Laozo are all people who value themselves, and there is nothing wrong with it.

Is the Red Sand Scorpion wrong? The Red Sand Scorpion is even more innocent. He has a good childhood, but he has lost his parents at the age of 8 (the Scorpion is 4 years younger than Mizuno and is now 8 years old). Who should he ask for to reason with him? He should not suffer such a thing.

After a long circle, everyone was right.

So what's wrong?

The war is wrong.

The war with interests as the core is wrong.

Furthermore, where is the mistake of war? Why is war obviously wrong, but it is still prevalent. What deep logic behind it is advancing?

This is something I want to make my thoughts come to mind.

Then let’s talk about other related aspects of this plot.

In terms of content, generally speaking, online articles that take a specific character (the protagonist) as the perspective should take everything to the point that is beneficial to the specific character as much as possible.

But I think there should be an exception when writing about war.

When writing about war, you write about the misery of one side, while the other side suffers no loss. This itself has no warning effect, but just means that we cover the protagonist's halo that is very unrealistic.

Whether it is writing or reading, I feel uncomfortable when I see this aberrant ending.

So the final result (in the next chapter), it is not that Rope Tree is saved and then the Scorpion father and mother die in vain, but that while the Scorpion father and mother die, the third generation of Fengying will get angry and pull many Konoha ninjas to be buried with them, and Rope Tree will also pretend to die.

(The fake death will last for more than 20 years, and you will basically never see the rope tree in the future. I will mention it during the finale.)

In fact, Rose Tree has almost zero strategic position in the whole book. He is an ordinary genius in combat and a simple boy in character, and has no special excellence.

There are many characters like Rose Tree, especially in Hot Blood Manga.

However, because he has a close relationship with the protagonists, Tsunade and Orochimaru, as far as the whole book is concerned, Rosaki is a good point to further shape the protagonists, Tsunade and Orochimaru.

The reason why Rose Tree did not die at the age of 12 was because Orochimaru had just taken Rose Tree at that time. I didn't want Orochimaru to turn black at that time, nor did I want Rose Tree to be simply taken away by a very random detonation trap.

Now, the time is ripe, and the rope tree dies at this point in time, which has three important functions.

First, as I said just now, the death of both Rope Tree and Scorpion father and mother brings the revelation of war.

Second, Orochimaru has a deeper understanding of the fragility of life. At the same time, Tsunade's support has added fire to his human experiments, but although he has conducted human experiments, he has not become as evil as the original work.

In fact, I don’t really want to make him turn evil, but the problem is that if Orochimaru Chunbai doesn’t do human experiments, many of the personal charms of this character will disappear.

Therefore, the pure Virgin and pure anti-evil are not suitable for Orochimaru. He actually doesn't care about the world or the village, he cares about the lives of him and the people around him.

If you really want to divide the camp, Orochimaru should belong to the chaotic neutral camp.

Third, it is actually better to fake death in a rope tree than to real death. If you really die, you will inevitably forget it if you sting for a while. However, fake death can keep this obsession and continuously promote the transformation of the characters.

As the plot develops, everyone will actually understand this.

Yoshiki is the character in my writing, and I hope he dies as much as he does, not like Neji.

2. Let’s summarize the nearly eighty chapters of this book.

First of all, the structural aspect.

The current chapters of this book are divided into two stages.

One is that the protagonist of Konoha was admitted to the school in April 2019 and Konoha started a war with the Saninnin, and the other is that the protagonist of Konoha was now graduated in March 2019 and has been here.

In these two stages, there are actually many small important nodes, such as the name of Sannin, the opening of Yile Ramen, the establishment of the medical ninja system, and the acquaintance with Pig Deer Butterfly...

And there are two major important nodes.

One is the bond between the protagonist and Minato or the love and kill each other.

Two formal competitions (entry tests and actual ranking assessments), one cooperation between the two (joint fight against Yunnin and Shangnin), and countless small battles (daily training).

This book is actually a big game of chess. I don’t want the protagonist to keep getting stronger and then gradually become invincible in the world.

I think the protagonist has always had opponents and confronts others.

As for the person I was fighting against, I chose the character Bo Feng Shui Gate, who was very strong in the early, middle and late stages.

In fact, I had already laid the groundwork for a vague way. When Tsunade agreed to Orochimaru to conceal Jiraiya and Sarutobi Hinasen, this was the starting point for the division of the camp.

In the end, a north-south Konoha system with Huofeng Mizuno and Uzumaki as the core will be established, and then the two sides will fight with two concepts as the core.

At present, people on the Minato side will have Sarutobi Hina, Uzumaki Kushina, Sarutobi Shinnosuke, Haki Sakuroshi, Jiraiya., Hinata Hizua, Hinata Hirata, Hinata Hirata...

The people on Uzumaki Kiyoshi include Tsunade, Orochimaru (+ all the strong ones who are reincarnated in the filthy land), and Nonoyu, the Medicine Master...

Such as Pig Deer Butterfly, Uchiha Mikoto, Uchiha Fugao, Uchiha Shimizu, Uchiha Itachi, Hachiki Kakashi, Maitai and Maitkai, are in the scope of the matter to be determined.

I will make the combat power system of both sides as balanced as possible, and then make arrangements to ensure that the story is exciting to the greatest extent.

The second important plot point is Danzo's death.

Danzo's death may seem small, but the butterfly storm that caused was absolutely huge.

In the near future, Nagato Yahiko Konan's Akatsuki's organization will develop steadily, which means that Nagato can steadily grow into a complete Six Paths of Payne, and Konan can steadily grow into a 600 billion-dollar detonator.

Looking from a distance, all Konoha ninjas and root ninjas that Danzo killed directly or indirectly in the original work can gain freedom.

Then, they joined the north and south koko leaves respectively to make the confrontation between the two sides more exciting.

In addition to the butterfly storm, there is actually another important role.

In Naruto, the only factors that are truly uncontrollable are Danzo and Kurojue. If you eliminate these two people, then the world can completely follow the main line of binary confrontation I designed.

Instead of following the main line of Indra, Asura reincarnation, and then Hei Jue Saved Mother.

Danzo is already dead, Hei Jue will probably die in Chapter 200.

At that time, we will arrange for Uzumaki Mito and Uchiha Madara to meet, and then realize it maliciously and then destroy Kurojue.

As existences that transcend this era's combat power system, Uzumaki Mito and Uchiha Madara will destroy the combat power balance when this binary system is not well constructed, and then make the story boring.

The best arrangement for the two of them in this era is that you stare at me and I stare at you.

When the future dual system is established and then the characters from the Warring States Period (Hamima Tobirama, Uchiha Izuna, Uchiha Tashima, Thousand-Handed Buddha, Hinata) are reincarnated in the complete filthy land, it is the time for them to truly shine.

Think about it, it's actually quite interesting.

In short, this book can be written very steadily, and writing hundreds of chapters should not be a problem.

I am looking forward to the subsequent story, because the main line of the North and South Konoha confrontation is also an idea that I thought of by chance but the more I think about it, the better.

If you are looking forward to it, I hope you can open this book for 30 seconds every day, which will be considered a reading.

Because the old editor resigned and replaced him with a new editor, and because he didn't find the same period data for a while, he didn't care about it and then deduced it. I'm not very sure about the future of the new book period.

I personally can write more than 10,000 words a day, and now I have some manuscripts left.

If you have poor grades, then write less entertainment for a while, and write the book and the final plot of the old philosopher within half a year and then open a new book.

I will continue to write until the day when I write high-quality products and tens of thousands of subscriptions. Every time I open a new book, it is actually a kind of growth.

That's it. Old book fans who are willing to grow up with the author will follow and support them every day.

In fact, there are some hard-core old book fans who often see recommendation votes and comments in this chapter in the backstage, and have become the veterans of the author name in my heart.

Finally, the student party should be about to start school. After the three small dots in the upper right corner of the reading page are opened, there is an automatic subscription inside, which can be turned on and then supports the author's first subscription and uniform subscription.

The pictures in the VIP chapter should be much more than the official chapter, and they are still worth it.

Then the more subscriptions, the more updates.

Brother who clicked, the author thanked me in advance.

I wish you all a prosperous academic career, junior high school students go to a provincial key high school, high school students go to an outstanding 985, and college students get a national award and qualification for postgraduate admission.

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