Testimonials after finishing this book and "Guarding the Ninja World for One Hundred Years from the Warring States Period"
This book has poor grades and is all booked at about 100. Let’s summarize it first.
This book collapsed later, basically starting from the third Ninja World War, when it was 500,000 words.
Because of the influence of Naruto, I prefer the word "binding".
The protagonist of the previous book starts at the age of nine, and the protagonist of this book starts at the age of six.
What do I want to do? I want the protagonist to grow from a very young age to a big one, and then in this growth process, friends and protagonists can form bonds.
Because the previous book was in the Warring States Period, Madara, Hashimara, Izumina, Tobirama and Mito were all the top talents, so there were more bonds.
Due to period issues in this book, at the beginning of World War II, only the original work that died prematurely is considered a top talent, and the shaping point of bonds is mainly placed on the shaping of Bofeng Mizuno.
I wanted Hakuzumi Mizuno to become his lifelong best friend and old enemy like Madara and Hashimara, Naruto and Sasuke. Because Uzumaki Kiyoshi's identity is so close to Konoha, I came up with the idea of Minami Konoha and Kidokoha.
The north and south Konoha confronted each other, and two major powers defected to each other, forming a forceful stalemate.
But I failed.
Because of the character's personality.
The protagonist is a sensible person, and Hakusuke is even more reasonable. Both of them are like Madara or Sasuke, and they are not the type of extreme. I can't find a reason to make them opposed. There is no support for Konoha's idea.
From this time on, there is no clear main line in this book, or to put it another way, the vortex Qing at this time has no "outcoming".
Without purpose, the following content is actually all water in the order of timeline.
Well, this is the main problem. Discovering the problem is a good thing, because the next book will solve him.
In addition to this question, I have also learned and realized many other things, all about the essence of online plots, and will be presented in the next book.
The following book and the first book began in the Warring States Period. Let me make up for the regret that the first book did not write the plot of the Warring States Period.
I changed my new author number and started again. The author's name is Beifeng Qinglie.
The work is called "Defending the Ninja World for a Hundred Years since the Warring States Period".
The Warring States system is much more familiar with the accumulation of million words in the first book than other authors. At the same time, the writing time of one year has greatly improved the plot control and rhythm control of the entire online writing compared to the novice period. This is probably my advantage.
Writing this new story is also my mission.
Because, due to the incompleteness of the Warring States Period, writing about the Warring States Period and writing about the Ninja Village Period are basically two different things, which are basically equivalent to original creation.
Therefore, except for the complete writing of the Naruto authors of the Warring States Period, they can basically just skip it.
And I want to present a reasonable and complete Warring States Period to everyone while maintaining a basic sense of pleasure.
Thank you everyone, if you want to read this story, we will see you in the next book.
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