Chapter 11 Writing
"Xiao Wang, your idea is very good!"
The two words "The World" came out of Wang Yu's mouth, and Teacher Chen and Yu Zili were really stunned for a while. Then, as if they had figured out something, Teacher Chen shouted loudly.
Yu Zili was not idle either. He had just thought about it, and now nodded, saying, "Teacher Chen, Lao Wang, you guys wait a moment, I'll talk about my thoughts and see if we have thought of going together?"
"Okay!" Wang Yu nodded with Teacher Chen.
Old Yu began to say, "I just finished reading this book yesterday. After reading it, I thought it was really good! But I also felt that there was something wrong with this book."
"What's the problem?" Teacher Chen was very curious.
Lao Yu continued: "The most obvious thing is that there are two parts of this novel. The first part is about the case of plum blossom theft, and the second part is about Shangguan Jinhong and the Jinqian Gang. These two parts feel quite apart, but there are some inexplicable connections in it."
Teacher Chen and Lao Wang both nodded.
"For example, Shangguan Jinhong's Golden Gang also rose two years ago. This time is consistent with Li Xunhuan's return from outside the pass and the plum blossom thieves in the world. However, the upper half did not have any information about the Golden Gang, which is so strange."
"That's right." Teacher Chen and Lao Wang said in unison.
Lao Yu was encouraged and became more and more excited, "I thought so. If we connect these, that is, the rise of the Money Gang and the emergence of the plum blossom thief will become one thing, which will make the whole story even more grand. If this story is connected, it can be written like this:
Shangguan Jinhong made great progress in martial arts, which is reflected in the book. He later surpassed the old man Tianji. Because his strength became stronger, he began to make greater plans and establish the Money Gang. To make the Money Gang bigger, it is necessary to weaken the strength of other sects in the martial arts world and create a plum blossom thief. This plum blossom thief was not targeted at Li Xunhuan. In short, the reward of the world's number one beauty made the entire martial arts world turmoil, so no one paid attention to the rise of the Money Gang.
However, Li Xunhuan's appearance made the plum blossom thief more meaningful. Just look at the first half, even Shaolin was involved, and even damaged important figures.
The novel does not describe the inner connection between the Plum Blossom the Money Gang, but if the Plum Blossom the Money Gang is behind the scenes, it will not only be logically reasonable, but also have a very grand layout."
Yu Zili's words were quite detailed, which meant that Wang Yu raised a direction and he added it.
This is also a profound expression of ideological transformation.
Teacher Chen looked at Wang Yu, and Lao Wang smiled and said, "Old Yu, you can do it, it's almost the same as the roundworms in my belly."
"Go to yours!"
During this fuss, the three men were very happy, and the atmosphere in the cottage was very interesting.
In this way, just change it?
Teacher Chen smiled for a while before saying, "Actually, the feeling of separation between the two parts is normal. I'll give you two kids a class, how about it?"
"Okay." Lao Wang and Lao Yu were ready to listen.
Teacher Chen did not delay and continued: "It should be said that the novel "The Swordsman of the Passionate Sword" was popular, and Mr. Gu Long himself was also surprised. When this book was serialized, it was actually two works. The first part was called this name, which means that when A Fei knew that Lin Xian'er was a plum blossom thief. The later part was called "The Soul of the Iron Bold", is it interesting? In fact, the copyright of literary works in that era was quite chaotic. These two books were published by two publishers, and they were later combined into one piece."
In this way, the sense of separation is natural.
Lao Wang and Lao Yu couldn't help but nod. In fact, even Lao Wang didn't know the inside story.
Teacher Chen continued, "Actually, as far as Mr. Gu Long's personal meaning is concerned, the protagonist of the first half of his writing should be A Fei, and this A Fei is him."
This...the two young men looked at each other in a little.
Didn’t you say that Li Xunhuan looks like Gu Long before? This is what you, Teacher Chen, said.
Teacher Chen smiled and said, "Mr. Gu Long himself admitted that the prototype of Li Xunhuan is a good friend of his, the cartoonist named "Brother Niu". This person was of great help to Gu Long in his early years. When Gu Long wandered home and took full advantage of Li Feimeng to lead the way, he embarked on the right path.
This is not very similar to the relationship between Li Xunhuan and A Fei. Moreover, Li Feimeng also married a wife who is much younger than him. Isn’t this Sun Xiaohong?
However, this is just the experience of the characters. Let’s look at A Fei, he also has the shadow of Gu Long. When he was writing this book, Gu Long had just separated from a girl, and this girl still had children with him. If that girl was Lin Xian'er, then Gu Long... was quite miserable."
Speaking of this, Teacher Chen’s expression was not very natural, and Wang Yu and Yu Zili had strange faces.
"I won't talk about this details. We have to look at the characters. As the plot deepens, the characters' personalities develop more and more. It is obvious that Mr. Gu Long wrote Li Xunhuan as himself, and A Fei was completely trapped in the quagmire and could not extricate himself. Of course, Mr. Gu Long also wrote in the end that when A Fei breaks through the love barrier, he will be reborn and sublimated."
Lao Wang and Lao Yu were fascinated by the fact that they both heard it.
"Because these are originally two novels, the connection between the plum blossom thief and Shangguan Jinhong is written as Lin Xianer and Shangguan Jinhong colluded, and the upper part has no money to help..."
But at this moment, Wang Yu interrupted, "In addition, Mr. Gu Long never modified his work, he would be fine after writing it."
After hearing this, Teacher Chen laughed, "Yes, that's it! The plum blossom thief and the money gang Shangguan Jinhong are not closely related to the two contents in the book, but we have established a brand new and interesting connection, as long as it is logical and as long as it is written reasonably, hey, maybe it is just what Mr. Gu Long wants to write but couldn't write it out.
So, Xiao Wang, that's why I just said it."
He got another praise, which made Comrade Xiao Wang blush, but he still had something to say.
"I watched a lot of Hong Kong-based film and television dramas yesterday. I found that many versions are studying who the plum blossom thief is in the plot. For example, the film directed by Chu Yuan in 1977, Long Xiaoyun was arranged to be a plum blossom thief. This arrangement gives people a 'small' feeling."
As soon as the small word came out, Lao Yu took over the topic, "Yes! We have to make it bigger! Don't say that we are a TV series, even if it's other things, men, it's better to be a big one!"
As soon as these words came out, the three of them laughed.
It is slightly dirty, but it is OK, it is in line with the "too great joy".
But since we talk about Hong Kong, especially in this version shot by Director Chu Yuan in 1977, there are many things that are of course worth complaining about, but there are also many highlights.
For example, the Plum Blossom Thieves arranged for Long Xiaoyun Long Fourth Master, and he was wearing pink clothes to prove that he was the Plum Blossom Thieves. However, he used a weapon to deal with Li Xunhuan, which was a magnet.
This magnet is not available in the book, it is a brand new idea. Even since here, it has been like this in several versions, and some of them are simply more exaggerated and changed to Magnetic Mountain.
Wang Yu remembers that the current version of "Little Li Flying Knife" has also been used as a reference.
If you are so frustrated, don’t worry about it now, we have determined the direction of the adaptation and the general plot structure.
Wang Yu's idea was recognized, and Lao Wang felt a great sense of accomplishment.
But at this moment, someone slammed the door and shouted, "Small sound! Some people work night shift!"
The three of them were stunned, and Lao Wang and Lao Yu both looked at Teacher Chen with at a loss.
Teacher Chen made a booing gesture, and Lao Wang and Lao Yu smiled on their faces.
Teacher Chen is a fat black man, even if his face turns red, no one can see it. Now this advantage is becoming more and more useful. He simply said: "The direction is like this, 'world'. Let's start construction."
"Okay." Lao Wang and Lao Yu also responded in a low voice.
In this way, the three-person screenwriter team began to officially operate.
"Who will hold the writing?"
"Why, I'll do it."
"Old Yu, you really can?"
"Look!"
"By the way, the line of Iron Passage Ar..."
"Of course I have to write it."
Chapter completed!