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What is feces? As the name suggests, it is a work that makes people vomit like feces.

The so-called light novel written by Yoshihiro Kakiki is undoubtedly such a disgusting work.

The meaningless scene description, the cumbersome historical narrative, the completely unintelligible characters' actions, the lines that make people feel artificial and incomprehensible, and even the names of characters' mutual names are sometimes completely chaotic.

Of course, this is just an on-the-scene problem. What is more fundamental is that his plot is completely meaningless. The so-called plot progress and the so-called development are completely zero, and he doesn't even know what the protagonist is going to do and what the meaning is. He just needs to do that, so he does it superficially. He doesn't even explain a little reason in the book.

‘Ah! The actual reason is because the protagonist has a deep reason to have to go.’

When facing my questioning, Kazumao answered with confidence. Unfortunately, I had no way to understand. Since what can be said in reality is not written in the book? Why do you have to play with the mystery?

If I remember correctly, the most important thing about the novel is to be clear and at least have enough logic to express the thoughts. Even if the thoughts are shallow, it still needs to be expressed in words to express the true state of the author and the protagonist. But unfortunately, there is no such change in thought in the so-called cosmic work of Cai Muzu.

This is full of unknown lines. I don’t know why the heroine was posted backwards. The move names in English words were spelled incorrectly, and there was no scene description for transitional purposes. There was also a system route that was as awkward as a Korean drama. As for the plot, it could be said that there was no such thing as a complete one. After a long time of going around, I finally returned to the origin of the beginning. What the whole protagonist did was to describe the settings, introduce the scenery, and then I did nothing more and ended like this.

This is what the so-called cosmic masterpiece of the zodiac. It is a crazy work made up of setting, self-consciousness, crazy words, and completely unaware of the so-called messy words. I wouldn't even read it if I wanted to be a person with normal thinking.

"As an author, no matter what he writes, you must first realize what he wrote. You don't even know what he wrote. You simply rely on your own confidence to create and then finish it. Do you think this is your victory and you can become a great writer? Don't be naive, Mr. Cai Muzou. No one will read what you wrote."

I looked indifferently at the gray-white wooden base on the floor and drew a cross on it with an oily pen.

"I think you should understand how deadly these ideas are for a work, Mr. Kazuo. If you want to express something, write it in the book. If you want to describe something, write it in the book. Don't just pile up words and sentences meaningfully and think it's very powerful, and don't think that if you have enough descriptions, you are a great writer. That's impossible. What you need now is not to write a light novel, but to write an essay to see what it means to start, inherit, turn and turn."

I have no need to lie about this. The things he wrote are such scum. The protagonist is like a mental illness. He suddenly completed a task with hundreds of words, and then used thousands of words to describe how powerful a skill is. Then he said that this skill is useless. The next few dozen words describe the boss, but he knocked down the boss, completely unsure of what he said.

Compared to these unbearable plots, the inverted sentences and inexplicable dialogues in the whole article are like adjustment products. As for the misspelled English words, it is even more innocuous jokes, and I am too lazy to point them out to him one by one.

"Anyway, my conclusion is that if you don't think about it carefully, I advise you not to write novels."

After putting off the hair on my forehead again, I patted the shoulder of the wood base.

If you don’t have ideas, talent, and meaninglessness, then it’s best not to lift up your pen. Even if you write for yourself, you still have your own ideas. Using the mentality of writing for yourself, you should write articles for others to read is a blasphemy for the words. For mediocre people, slowly honing is the best choice.

Youth does not mean everything is allowed, and youth does not mean that you can be wasted at will. I am not such a pure person. I just want to tell that troubled guy that is just and correct in the world.

It is meaningless to do nothing to learn from simple efforts.

Simply using momentum is just momentum. Nothing can be done with one's own efforts alone. Only by describing it can impress the viewer. The readers in this world are the readers, and the readers are the ones with the least demanding requirements. Because they want to see a story, they only want to see a story. Any lyricism, the author's messy private goods, and the messy descriptions are just embellishments of stories. What they want to see is just stories.

"I won't just tell you like others that you can continue writing or how, or remove errors from the surface from the grammar and structure. I'm asking you what your mentality is. If you really want to write a good novel, go online and read Robert's lectures, and then find him to read the book "Stories" carefully before writing it."

I stuffed the copy with a cross onto the wooden base, and with a look of pity on my face, I pointed out that there was a fairly correct path. Newcomers without the guidance of masters could only learn by themselves, which is natural.

"If you want to write a novel, you can take a look at the works of Sakura Ting Kazuki in terms of description. This writer is very unique in terms of exquisiteness. If you want to write a grand and majestic, then read the works of Yoshiki Tanaka. The Legend of the Galaxy Hero is still a classic. In terms of scripts, you can take a look at the box office poison Romeo Tanaka. Although the box office is bleak, he is essentially a very excellent script writer. If you have read all these works, study them carefully and then talk about writing. If you want to write a book that conquers others rather than conquers your own, then this level must be overcome."

I did not recommend works such as Takizu Dazai Osamu or Akutagawa Ryunosuke because their worldview will affect Takizu's writing style. I also did not recommend works of Takizu's original reasoning, because it did not conform to the impetuous worldview of boys high school students. So what I recommend to him are some more gentle, calm and average characters.

If this cannot help him, then it will be just like this. I watched the back of the titanium and Musume slowly climb up from the ground and leaving without even saying hello. Recently, I have been very upset and depressed and feel a little happy.
Chapter completed!