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Preview and closing remarks

In this world, humans can control "concrete energy" to form "concrete objects".

Someone's manifested objects can introduce chemical reactions: manifested heat weapons;

Someone's manifestation can simulate a single atomic state: an invincible weapon;

The manifest objects of people are invisible magnetic fields;

Concrete light, concrete electricity, and even manifest life...

"Expressing things", "heart instrument", "mind field"... Human beings are walking on extraordinary roads, and their thoughts and wills are signs of roads and the only weapon to compete with "nightmare"!

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The following book is a brand new power system, using concrete objects to fight, and the fighting style is particularly exciting. I hope that book friends will continue to collect this book if they like it.

This book will be released early next month, and a preview will be given in advance.

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The book "No One Understands the Heavens Better Than Me" has 970,000 words, and the plot of the Three Worlds is considered to be complete.

In summary, I wrote it very unsatisfiedly, and I basically went through all the pitfalls that I should go through when writing a book.

So, if you ask for monthly tickets or something, I feel that this book is not qualified, so I never mentioned it.

Let’s summarize the problem: the first question of character design.

The most important thing in online literature is a sense of inclusion, so that readers can enter and empathize.

However, the problem with this book is that the protagonist's identity was constructed as Naruto's mentor at the beginning, and the structure of a dual protagonist with Naruto in the Naruto world.

The reason why the plot of the beginning is smooth is that most of the sense of substitution is Naruto, and the protagonist becomes the Golden Finger.

These books are written through the beginning of the book. After transforming Naruto's thoughts, follow the original routine, the protagonist's thoughts must transform the next person.

But when I was writing, two problems arose.

1. If you rashly change the perspective that readers have applied, and don’t have the ability to write group portraits, the book will seem to lose its supposedly rhythm.

2 It’s just a repetitive routine that I feel too miserable and I feel sorry for the readers.

(At that time, the Naruto chapter should have been completed temporarily and the next one should be opened, but at that time I didn’t realize it. When I realized it, half a month passed.)

After realizing these two problems, after writing the Naruto, he adjusted the protagonist's character to the protagonist in the ordinary sense.

But when the protagonist is to be supported to the position of the protagonist, the problem arises again. The image of the protagonist in the beginning is too specific, profit-oriented and pursuit of interests. It is not as specific as it is no longer growing. Any modification is a collapse of the character.

Therefore, the Marvel chapter was written in a very messy way, and I wrote it over and deleted it again and again, and I revised the outline countless times, but I was a little confused.

So, when we were writing the second and second chapters, we simply wrote it in the way of Invincible.

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As for the plot structure, I made another mistake in the online literature, which focused too much on reconstructing the original plot, so that I ignored the most important excitement of the online literature.

That is, the rhythm collapsed.

After reading it, my mind is clear but bland.

How to say it? It is really thankless to reconstruct the plot. It is both reasonable and interesting.

To be reasonable, I still write according to the original plot, and the rhythm is better controlled, but it loses the freshness. It is too miserable and I feel sorry for the readers.

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Chapter completed!
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